America has always had magic. A lot of it. But sub-consciously he's repressed it without even being aware he had it… until he starts releasing the massive amounts of magic forcefully and painfully.
The Principle of Contagion, part 1 of 10
It started about fifteen minutes after the meeting reconvened post-lunch, but it wasn’t the ziti alla forno - courtesy of the Italies, who’d begged to make the food even though the meeting was in London - coming back to haunt him. It was something else, something hot and throbby and bright. It started in America’s toes and rose up his legs, and he tried to ignore it as it hovered somewhere around his lower belly. He had no idea why he’d thought bright because he couldn’t see it, only feel it. But it was, it was, a growing bubble of something bright and those other things, inside him and trying to get out
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anonymous
August 8 2011, 23:48:08 UTC
Oh man, I love this. It's been a while since I've read Hetalia fic that I really, really enjoyed. Cute, funny, and sexy. Ah, what else can you ask for? Thank you for writing. ♥
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anonymous
August 9 2011, 01:52:08 UTC
I’m just a smut-writer at heart
Dearest, there's nothing wrong with that! A fellow smut writer salutes you ♥
This was gorgeous. The smut was sexy, America's problem was hilarious and yet you made clear that it was a real problem and your dialogue skills are awesome. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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anonymous
August 9 2011, 08:01:34 UTC
I can't even explain how much I love this, it was all brilliant and I can't even name all the parts I liked. I thought that the ending was quite sad with how America doesn't remember and even though England was expecting that, he still hoped it wouldn't happen.
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anonymous
August 11 2011, 04:15:59 UTC
Your writing style is so awesome, I'm a little bit in love with it. And the descriptions of magic! How you're approaching it sort of to the side and explaining it in these offhand terms, it just fits it to a T. Some particular turns of phrase got to me, like England blowing hot and cold and doing mind-blowing things as well and America on the verge of literally shitting rainbows (I probably laughed too hard at that). And the butterflies! 8D
I also love love love the characterizations, I really must congratulate you on how well you got them. Also, Iran being so eager to punch America was just icing on the cake. It's all wonderful, thanks for posting such a wonderful fill!
America has always had magic. A lot of it. But sub-consciously he's repressed it without even being aware he had it… until he starts releasing the massive amounts of magic forcefully and painfully.
The Principle of Contagion, part 1 of 10
It started about fifteen minutes after the meeting reconvened post-lunch, but it wasn’t the ziti alla forno - courtesy of the Italies, who’d begged to make the food even though the meeting was in London - coming back to haunt him. It was something else, something hot and throbby and bright. It started in America’s toes and rose up his legs, and he tried to ignore it as it hovered somewhere around his lower belly. He had no idea why he’d thought bright because he couldn’t see it, only feel it. But it was, it was, a growing bubble of something bright and those other things, inside him and trying to get out ( ... )
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And their banter throughout was great :D
America's descriptions of things are hilarious--he should seriously narrate like, everything. XD
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Dearest, there's nothing wrong with that! A fellow smut writer salutes you ♥
This was gorgeous. The smut was sexy, America's problem was hilarious and yet you made clear that it was a real problem and your dialogue skills are awesome. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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And thank you so much!
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I really enjoyed reading this, thank you!
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I also love love love the characterizations, I really must congratulate you on how well you got them. Also, Iran being so eager to punch America was just icing on the cake. It's all wonderful, thanks for posting such a wonderful fill!
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