USUK - lusting after parent's partner
anonymous
July 24 2011, 11:00:05 UTC
Half inspired by a Rainy doujin from a while ago.
I would love to see a human AU where Alfred is 18 or so, still living with his divorced mom/dad. He sees Arthur around a lot and is vaguely interested in finding out who he is, but doesn't bother doing anything about it. Then one day, his mom/dad comes home with their new, far younger boyfriend: Arthur. Alfred becomes more and more attracted to him over time, to the point where he acts on his urges. Arthur initially doesn't want anything to do with it--being his parent's partner and around ten years older than him--but eventually gives in.
I want angst and guilty, guilty underhand smut, please ♥ happy ending not required.
AN: As this is an AU I hope you don’t mind me making Matthew into Alfred’s friend rather than his brother. Aside from that... I’ve nothing else to say, really!
There are very few people lining the pavements and browsing the stores, which Alfred is strangely thankful of- he hates large crowds, because it was in a large crowd that Dad told Mom he was leaving, and promptly proved his threat by walking away until nobody could see him anymore. It may be irrational fear, but it’s one Alfred has developed all the same.
After locking their bikes up by chaining them to the park railings, Matthew and Alfred make their way into Main Street, passing by shops that don’t attract their attention at all, every now and again taking a few minutes to browse through the stock of one that does. When Matthew insists on visiting a bookshop, Alfred lets out a groan but doesn’t refuse him the opportunity, because the first bookshop they find actually has air conditioning and it’s a welcome liberation from the unbearable heat
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asfsdfgk authoranon, I love this already! The characterizations are great--Matthew and Alfred are amazing together and I don't mind at all that they're friends rather than brothers. The fact that Matt invited him out but hadn't thought of anything to do is so IC, ha!
I must say that I love the idea of Arthur working in a bookshop, it's perfect for him and adorable. Even with just that little snippet of Arthur, I love the way you've described him and can't wait for him to appear more <3 Ugh, I can't even explain how excited I am for this ;w;
Alfred wakes up on Sunday morning at nine AM to the sound of his mother yelling about something incoherent. He sits up, bleary-eyed and limp from sleep, to strain his ears in an attempt to decipher the shouts.
“Get down here right now, young man! You’re the laziest bastard I’ve ever met
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Just an FYI; I’m adding Belarus, aka Natalia, to the cast of this little AU, but she’s more of a plot device than an important character!
He doesn’t go home the next morning prior to attending college for the day, instead choosing to go in with Matthew. Alfred hadn’t phoned his Mom to inform her that he was spending the night at Matthew’s house and he’s not in any mood to talk to her before a day of dull education- it would just stress him out more.
Lessons go without a hitch, aside from the fact the creepy Head of Sciences tried to have a go at him for having his shoelaces untied... twice.
When the bell finally goes for lunch break he goes to lock himself away in the school library. Ever since Saturday he’s had the urge to read something, but he’s not sure why.
“Hey Alfred!” a stern voice calls, “Why are you here
( ... )
Wow, I nearly missed this! I can't believe you updated so quickly, a!anon <3 I'm loving this more and more with each part.
I don't mind Belarus at all--you can add as many characters you need, as I actually enjoy seeing other characters thrown in. I am especially loving Alfred and Matthew's friendship, it is adorable ;w;
And poor, poor Al! You have to feel for him when his mom is such a bitch ;; I can't wait to see more of him interacting with Arthur.
It doesn’t surprise him a bit when he wakes up in the morning to come downstairs and see Arthur there at the kitchen table, half-awake as he slowly gets through the contents of a bowl of cereal.
“Where’s Mom?” Alfred asks, coolly, walking over to the fridge to fetch the carton of orange juice.
“She’s still in bed,” Arthur replies, with a voice soft from sleep. When he realises the connotation behind his answer, he cringes. “I- I mean...”
“I know exactly what you mean,” Alfred says, slumping into the chair opposite Arthur’s. “I don’t care
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When he gets home, he is almost surprised that Arthur isn’t there. His mother is in the living room, curled up on the couch and snoring gently, so he heads up immediately to his bedroom to prepare for the date (if one can even call it that) with Natalia
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Oh man, sorry I'm so late getting to this! I didn't even realize you'd updated a!anon.
I absolutely love Arthur's character, he seems like such a nice guy ;u; he seems so happy to help sdjfhsjf cute. Alfred is great too; it's nice to see him not warm up to Arthur instantly--I can't wait for them to get to know each other more.
This really deserves more comments, so I thought I'd mention... you haven't been posting updates on the fills list? You can totally do that, and that way more people will see the new parts of your fic! Looking forward to more, author!anon ♥
I would love to see a human AU where Alfred is 18 or so, still living with his divorced mom/dad. He sees Arthur around a lot and is vaguely interested in finding out who he is, but doesn't bother doing anything about it. Then one day, his mom/dad comes home with their new, far younger boyfriend: Arthur. Alfred becomes more and more attracted to him over time, to the point where he acts on his urges. Arthur initially doesn't want anything to do with it--being his parent's partner and around ten years older than him--but eventually gives in.
I want angst and guilty, guilty underhand smut, please ♥ happy ending not required.
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It’s a Saturday ( ... )
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After locking their bikes up by chaining them to the park railings, Matthew and Alfred make their way into Main Street, passing by shops that don’t attract their attention at all, every now and again taking a few minutes to browse through the stock of one that does. When Matthew insists on visiting a bookshop, Alfred lets out a groan but doesn’t refuse him the opportunity, because the first bookshop they find actually has air conditioning and it’s a welcome liberation from the unbearable heat ( ... )
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I must say that I love the idea of Arthur working in a bookshop, it's perfect for him and adorable. Even with just that little snippet of Arthur, I love the way you've described him and can't wait for him to appear more <3 Ugh, I can't even explain how excited I am for this ;w;
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“Get down here right now, young man! You’re the laziest bastard I’ve ever met ( ... )
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He doesn’t go home the next morning prior to attending college for the day, instead choosing to go in with Matthew. Alfred hadn’t phoned his Mom to inform her that he was spending the night at Matthew’s house and he’s not in any mood to talk to her before a day of dull education- it would just stress him out more.
Lessons go without a hitch, aside from the fact the creepy Head of Sciences tried to have a go at him for having his shoelaces untied... twice.
When the bell finally goes for lunch break he goes to lock himself away in the school library. Ever since Saturday he’s had the urge to read something, but he’s not sure why.
“Hey Alfred!” a stern voice calls, “Why are you here ( ... )
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I don't mind Belarus at all--you can add as many characters you need, as I actually enjoy seeing other characters thrown in. I am especially loving Alfred and Matthew's friendship, it is adorable ;w;
And poor, poor Al! You have to feel for him when his mom is such a bitch ;; I can't wait to see more of him interacting with Arthur.
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“Where’s Mom?” Alfred asks, coolly, walking over to the fridge to fetch the carton of orange juice.
“She’s still in bed,” Arthur replies, with a voice soft from sleep. When he realises the connotation behind his answer, he cringes. “I- I mean...”
“I know exactly what you mean,” Alfred says, slumping into the chair opposite Arthur’s. “I don’t care ( ... )
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At the declaration, Arthur looks legitimately happy.
askdjhskdksdf a!a, i love what you're doing so far. *F5s like crazy*
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I absolutely love Arthur's character, he seems like such a nice guy ;u; he seems so happy to help sdjfhsjf cute. Alfred is great too; it's nice to see him not warm up to Arthur instantly--I can't wait for them to get to know each other more.
This really deserves more comments, so I thought I'd mention... you haven't been posting updates on the fills list? You can totally do that, and that way more people will see the new parts of your fic! Looking forward to more, author!anon ♥
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This is coming along amazingly so far!! Please update soon, anon!! I'll be watching out for the next installment.
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