Past-Part Fills Part 7

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Past-Part Fills Part Seven

Fills from past parts can go here!
Fills from the current part (part 22) MUST go in that part's post until it is full.

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[Part 13] RusCan - stuck in an elevator anonymous March 6 2012, 04:17:07 UTC
Original Request here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/16221.html?thread=47842653#t47842653

Late for a meeting Canada dashes for the elevator, slams the button and tries to catch his breath at the sound of girl of ipanema. Until he realizes he's sharing the ride with his brother's past archenemy (now friend), Russia. Awkward ensues. But it would've been okay, if the power hadn't gone out and they were now stuck in the elevator for god know how long.

The twist? They had had an affair during the Cold War, and Ivan had broken Matt's heart when he called it off for no apparent reason. (It can be for whatever reason, but I'd like something along the lines that Ivan did it to protect Matthew)

Sex is optional, but very much appreciated. ♥

Notes: A friend and I decided to challenge ourselves to fill the exact same request with a word limit of 1500 words.

As you can tell, I failed miserably! orz NUMBERS, WHAT ARE THEY. WHAT IS COUNTING. Dear kink ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [1/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 04:20:29 UTC
Mouse-over the language words for a translation!

Canada knew, even as he'd set the alarm last night (far too late!) that getting up so early was ambitious and possibly out of the realm of possibility. He also knew that the after-dinner coffee he'd ordered was a bad idea because he wouldn't fall asleep until the blue hours of the night. And it was decently cold in Oslo; he hadn't wanted to get out of bed --

And excuses, excuses, nagged a voice that felt suspiciously like England, we said nine am and we meant nine am!

And now it was nearly eleven-thirty and he was over two hours late for the working group on domestic security issues that the Netherlands had so kindly set up for them to begin discussing something relevant and derail somehow into the war on terror.

With any luck, he thought, as he rounded the corner and spotted an open set of elevator doors, marked above with a red arrow pointing down - he panicked and put in an extra effort for that added burst of speed, c'mon legs, don't fail me now! - that was where they'd be at ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [2/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 04:23:21 UTC
Russia's fingernails were white where they gripped the guardrail, as white as his face (as his hair, even). His chest rose and fell in shallow, terrified breaths. "There are failsafes," he whispered. "Even if the cable snaps, there are others. And the brakes. There are brakes. And safeties on the brakes. I met the man who invented them, once? you know? Norway must have them in his elevators, it would make no sense not to -"

"Of course there are failsafes," Canada said, standing up and approaching cautiously - like a terrified animal, Russia shrank back and Canada stopped. "There are failsafes," he repeated, insisting. "Trust me."

Wrong thing to say, he thought, because although Russia's breaths steadied and he calmed down, he glowered and crossed his arms over his chest. "It has been a long time since I have heard that," he spat.

Snapping: "I really don't think you've any right to comment."
With a sneer: "Maybe if you'd trusted me then we wouldn't have taken things where we took them."
In ire: "You're the one who broke up with me, ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [3/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 05:36:22 UTC
"Yeah, until you broke it off, eh?" Canada said, and an unasked-for bitter tone crept into his voice, but instead of stopping to work on getting it out, he prattled on. "Until you decided enough was enough and you'd tired of games and you just cut me off, like what we were had never mattered and I was completely forgettable."

"I didn't -"

"You haven't spoken to me since, Russia. Don't lie to me. This is the first time in thirty years we've even spoken face-to-face about something that isn't politics - what was I supposed to think?"

"Please, it is Ivan. You won the right to call me that, I did not simply ... revoke such privileges." Canada wouldn't have been surprised if he had. After all, if Russia attempted to call him Matthew now, he might actually slap the man across the face. "Things were different, then. You don't know the whole story -"

"You didn't give me any story!" Canada protested. "Your last words were, and I quote, I regret to inform you that this affair is over, best of luck in Lebanon and see you at the next UN ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [4/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 05:45:35 UTC
"You abstained from the vote to send help," Canada said. "You weren't even sending any help. It was a reassignment from other peacekeeping operations, and there were no Soviet personnel there either. So you can't try and say you couldn't spare the manpower because it wasn't about that."

"I was not the sole abstention! Czechoslovakia did the same!" Russia insisted, and though it was true, that wasn't the point, and Canada ignored the sad attempt at deflection.

"No, instead, your manpower was being redirected elsewhere in the Middle East. Instead, you were funnelling billions of dollars in economic and military aid to Afghanistan, so that you could invade it a year later!"

"That is what you think?" Russia asked. "Dorogoy, you think I used it as a distraction?"

"Don't you call me that!"

"You do. You think I used you as a distraction! It wasn't like that -"

"You're making it out to be like I'm some kind of bitter ex-boyfriend," Canada grumbled. "I knew where you were sending the money. America found out about it, so he told the rest ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [5/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 05:50:00 UTC
"Don't talk about what would have happened if you had," Canada said, ashamed for his previous outburst because for all that he felt, Russia was right and it had been the only way to prevent further backlash. "I ... guess it's better that things ended the way they did."

"Perhaps not ended," Russia replied gently, tucking a lock of hair behind Canada's ear, "but merely paused?"

"Ivan..." he began, like a warning.

"I did not carry on with anybody else after you," Russia continued, his voice quiet and imploring. "I could not do it. Not for lack of trying - there was Afghanistan, and then Belarus has always had her interests. But -" and here he let his hand fall, slip gracefully past Canada's shoulder down his arm to hold his hand loosely with two fingers, as though wondering whether he would be granted permission for such an act, "I had never wanted you nearly so badly as when your brother made it perfectly clear you were off-limits. And there has been no one for me since ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [6/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 06:00:41 UTC
There was a creak and a sound of something sliding open, and suddenly the cabin was flooded with light from the doors. They broke apart to find technicians in suits looking up at them from below (the elevator must have stopped between floors) as well as Norway, who seemed confused ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [7/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 06:06:22 UTC
He tilted his head up to receive Ivan's lips, and this kiss, unlike the previous one in the elevator, was not chaste. It began with an open mouth, with tongue, and heat, and promise, and every one of Ivan's breaths from the get-go were audible moans that vibrated against him. Matthew too was similarly affected and ... and there was a French phrase that leapt to his mind more readily that described more accurately how he felt: il fut saisi, transi de joie -

Matthew ceased thinking in actual words - English or French - at all, and let Ivan lead him to the bed, having only the barest presence of mind to strip off his shirt before hitting the mattress. This was wise, because trapped as he was, pinned between the soft whatever that Norway had his hotel duvets made of and Ivan's wonderfully warm body, it would have been awkward to undress himself ( ... )

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Unfinished Business - [8/8] anonymous March 6 2012, 06:44:42 UTC
He wished he had many hands, one for each of Ivan's nipples, one for his hip, another to wrap around his waist and many more to touch everywhere ... but that didn't even make physical sense and he only had the two he was given with which he must make do. So he applied one around Ivan's neck to bring him close and kiss him again, and the other to their erections, not knowing whether Ivan had been presumptuous enough to bring lube and feeling too tightly wound for anything that fancy anyway (as delicious as it would have been, so more was the better that they started tonight like this). He pressed their bodies so close together and jerked his hips in time as best he could.

Ivan helped by wrapping his arms around his waist, by pulling him in and not letting him go. "I dreamt of this," he gasped between kisses, whispering in his ear once he knew Matthew was close (after all this time, Ivan still knew when). "Matthew, I wanted to drown in my dreams ( ... )

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notes anonymous March 6 2012, 06:53:15 UTC
I am not an historian, nor have I studied the long-running Israeli-Palestinian conflict in detail, so if I should offend, I sincerely apologise and would appreciate being corrected in a straightforward non-flamey manner. :)

Lead up: Lebanon borders Israel to Israel's north (and Lebanon's south). From 1968 on, the Palestinian Liberation Organisation (PLO) and other Palestinian groups established a quasi-state in southern Lebanon and used it as a base for raids planned for northern Israel. Israel responded with its own attacks. Violence escalated back and forth (and also within Lebanon - the Lebanese civil war began in 1975 ( ... )

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Re: notes anonymous March 7 2012, 06:11:32 UTC
Screw the word limit. This is excellent. Your friend's fic might have made your self-imposed limit but it lacked everything that made your fic great. You did a wonderfull job of showing the conflict involved in their relationship and breakup. America the meddling jerk is very characteristic of the reality of the American government and military so I totally approve of all your made up conflict caused by him.

Oh, and the smut was nice too. I always like smut in fics. C:

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Re: notes anonymous March 7 2012, 20:35:28 UTC
That was a really nice reading, anon! You made my poor heart ache for the both of them >.< Historical and not so historical facts are very well used and even the things you made up are believable, the way you put them. I like when fics can mix up reality with imagination, but it's not always an easy task. You, indeed, did a great job and before I reached the notes, you even had me wonder if I was rememberign the facts right ^^'
About Canada and Russia, they were very IC and since I really believed they deserved an happy endign, I'm very happy they got it :)
America was IC too, even without really being in the story. I want to say that I really like him and my head canon says he's not so much of a villain, but any story needs one bad guy, so simply this time it was his turn :)

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Re: notes anonymous October 30 2012, 23:54:55 UTC
Hey, hey, Author!Anon?

How do you code that mouse-over thing for the translations? That's really really cool.

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Re: notes anonymous February 4 2013, 03:29:46 UTC
oh! I'm so sorry, I didn't see this until ... right now. :'DD I hope you're still around.

The mouseover thing is done by doing this:

Some Actual text!

which LJ will let you do straight up in the comments box even if you're on anon (which is really nice of LJ!)

Anyway that stuff produces the following:

Some Actual text!

Just copypasta what you want your mouseover text to be, and the actual text to be mouseover'd! Good luck anon!! <3

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Re: notes anonymous February 4 2013, 06:49:48 UTC
*has terrible urge to make all her comments in mouseover text now*

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Re: notes anonymous February 4 2013, 23:46:24 UTC
That is a really, really brilliant idea.

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