Past-Part Fills Part 7
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Past-Part Fills Part Seven
Fills from past parts can go here!
Fills from the current part (part 22) MUST go in that part's post until it is full.
Link to the original request (and if an ongoing fill, any previous chapters/sections).
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A group of students get stuck in an all day Saturday detention. Wackiness Ensues. Keep it as similar or make it as different from the movie as you like just lots of fun stuff.
Would like America, Russia & England to all be part of the group but any other characters and parings are up to you. (Bonus if some combination of Russ/Amer/Eng, (or all three together), end up together by the end)
Sorry, OP; I couldn't work in Russia and America. They're mentioned, though. England's in here too, but probably not like you wanted him to be. Your characters just didn't quite fit what this request inspired in me, so....
This will follow the plot of the movie pretty closely in the beginning and then start to veer off. I would have said something other than 'Small Ensemble' in the title, but then there might be spoilers.
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Dear Mr. Kirkland-
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Luise Beilschmidt sat in the front seat of her grandfather’s car.
“I’m sorry, Groβvater,” she said.
The older man sighed.
“Suβling, if you wanted to go shopping that badly, you should have told me.”
He turned in his seat to look at his granddaughter.
“I would have taken you- you know I used to take Gilbert out of school to go to the car shows when he was a student here.”
“I know, Groβvater,” Luise said quietly.
“I’ll take you after Saturday detention is over,” her grandfather told her. “To make up for missing your day out with your friends. Now go inside and have a good day.”
Luise shouldered her purse, picked up her lunch, and got out of the car.
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Im Yong-Soo sat in the back seat of his mother’s car.
His mother glared at him through the rearview mirror.
“Is the first time or the last time I will be driving you to school on a Saturday for something that is not an academic extracurricular activity?” she demanded.
“The last, ( ... )
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I absolutely love the idea of Lovino being Bender. I didn't even think about that... It's genius! And it fits him so damn well. Also, I love the idea of possible Lovino/Luise xD
I guess the girl's Belarus? Or Fem!Russia? Either way is awesome. Can't wait to read the next chapter. This is going to be so great! :D
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I hate it when you get on LJ and can't see the new stuff. Then I have to find a fill I like and fire off a comment to get the site to update (and then sometimes it still doesn't work!)- which is good, because I really should comment more, but by that time I've suddenly lost an hour that I should have used to do other things.
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A man, the detention teacher, stomped in, holding a stack of paper.
“Well, so I see you all managed to bloody well show up on time,” he said.
Luise raised her hand timidly.
“Um, excuse me, Mr. Kirkland. I just want to say that I’m sorry for skipping class and I won’t do it again. I don’t think I belong here, so- can I go no-”
“It’s seven-oh-bloody-six,” Mr. Kirkland said, completely ignoring her. “I’m stuck with you wankers for another eight hours and fifty-four sodding minutes. Principle Hohenzollern tells me that the purpose of detention is for you all ‘to ponder the error of your ways’-”
The boy with the sunglasses closed his book loudly and slammed it down on the table.
Luise winced.
“-but I’m damn certain that it’s just to torture me. Since I want to cut down on the stupidity I have to endure on what should be my bloody day off, there will be no talking ( ... )
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Slowly, they all became aware of a low muttering from the corner. One by one, they turned around to stare at the girl at the back table. Her hands were hidden in her lap, and she was staring at the table top with such intensity that it was a wonder that it didn’t burst into flames.
She gave no indication of noticing their stares, but started to rock back and forth in her seat, her long platinum hair swinging slightly.
“Marriedmarriedmarriedmarriedmarriedmarriedmarriedmarriedmarriedmarriedmarried,” she chanted to herself, a little louder than before.
Everyone quickly turned around again.
Matthew looked blankly at the wall and tapped the pencil Mr. Kirkland had given him against the desk.
T-ta-ta, t-ta-ta, t-ta-ta…“Who do I think I am?” Yong- ( ... )
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“Don’t talk to her like that!” Matthew snapped, whipping around.
The other boy winked at him, smirking.
“You’re a sexy man when you’re angry, Matthew,” he purred.
Matthew blushed furiously and glared at him for a second before turning back around and crossing his arms.
“Hey, bookbrains,” he said.
Yong-Soo looked up and blinked, pointing at himself with one of his pens uncertainly.
“Yeah, you. Go close that damn door and let’s see how long it takes for varsity jacket to scream for more dick.”
“Hey!” Matthew exclaimed angrily, turning around again. “Hey!”
Vargas tilted his head slightly and cocked an eyebrow.
“Yeah?”
“If I lose it, you’re going to be paying dental surgery bills for the next three years!”
“Really?” Vargas challenged.
“Really,” Matthew said, and turned back around; muttering ‘fag’ under his breath.
The chair behind him screeched.
“You want to say that to my ( ... )
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<3
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It's going to stay close-ish to the movie- as in, things like what people actually say and do are different while keeping to the general plotline- for a while... about until everyone sneaks out of the library to go to the lockers, I think.
Then the basic idea of the scenes stays the same while the content goes off at right angles the story line. By the end, things will be completely different.
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Matthew and Luise turned back around; and Vargas got up from his seat to sit on the ramp railing next to their desk.
“Let’s close that damn door,” he said. “Can’t have any sort of fucking fun with that bastard Kirkland spying on us every other damn second.”
“But he said to keep the door open-” Yong-Soo tried to protest.
“Who the fucking hell cares?” Vargas asked.
“For the last time, Vargas, shut up!” Matthew snapped. “There are four other people in this room who don’t want to-”
“Mio Dio!” Vargas exclaimed melodramatically, placing a hand over his heart in faked wonder. “It can count! I knew you had to be smart to play-”
He sneered at Matthew.
“Hockey.”
“Who gave you the right to judge anybody?” Matthew demanded.
Luise bit the inside of her lip.
“You know, Vargas, you don’t even matter,” Matthew continued. “If you disappeared forever, no one would care. Nobody would even notice.Vargas stared hard at the back wall for a few ( ... )
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“Hell do I care?” Vargas asked.
“It’s because you’re scared.”
“Dio, you i ricci are so smart!” Vargas told her. “That’s exactly the fuck why I feel the need to point out the bullshit everyone damn well spews everywhere!”
“You’re a coward at heart,” Luise continued.
“I’m in the Math Club,” Yong-Soo said.
“You’re scared that no one will accept you, because you’re different, so you make yourself feel better by telling yourself it doesn’t really matter,” Luise told him.
“And the Chemistry Club,” Yong-Soo said.
“Oh, because the rest of the world being a bunch of fucking bastards doesn’t factor in anywhere, huh?”
“You don’t know that, not for certain. You don’t really know any of us.”
“I don’t know any pervertiti, either, but that doesn’t fucking mean I’m going to hang out with those shitfaces, either.”
“And the Mandarin Honors Society-”
“Un secondo, bella,” Vargas told Luise. He looked over her head at Yong-Soo. “What the fuck are you going on about over ( ... )
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Luise stared at him, and Matthew scooted back in his chair slightly- and then Kirkland’s footsteps moved out of the office and down the hallway.
After a few seconds, Vargas snorted, and his smirk came back. He straightened up and sauntered over to the library doors.
“Hey; hey!” Yong-Soo said. “Those are supposed to stay open!”
Vargas turned around to face him, now walking backwards, and pointed.
“You. Bookbrains. You’re the one who wanted us to write our fucking papers; so set a good example and write your damn paper!”
“What are you doing?” Luise hissed nervously.
“Leaving, I hope,” Matthew muttered ( ... )
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Matthew is wonderful as the awkward jock and I love Yong-Soo. And that strange girl in the background, I wonder who on earth she could be?
I cam here for the femGermany, I'll stay for the whole story.
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