Past-Part Fills Part 7

Feb 27, 2011 12:31



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Past-Part Fills Part Seven

Fills from past parts can go here!
Fills from the current part (part 22) MUST go in that part's post until it is full.

Link to the original request (and if an ongoing fill, any previous chapters/sections).

Don't forget to link your new fill at the fill Read more... )

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Twisted England, AU mpreg(America) anonymous November 2 2012, 04:44:51 UTC
The Most Dangerous of All anonymous November 2 2012, 04:48:24 UTC
Once upon a time there was a dear little girl who was loved by everyone who looked at her, but most of all by her grandmother, and there was nothing that she would not have given to the child ( ... )

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The Most Dangerous of All - [1a/?] anonymous November 2 2012, 12:34:03 UTC
Bleh. Forgot to do the chapter number. >_<;

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The Most Dangerous of All - [1b/?] anonymous November 4 2012, 03:02:05 UTC
When America awoke, he was lying on a bed in a small room. He might have been happy - the place reminded him so much of the home he once lived in with England - but he felt horrible. His head pounded and burned. His arms and legs were still numb. His heart pounded in his chest ( ... )

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The Most Dangerous of All - [1c/?] anonymous November 4 2012, 03:53:42 UTC
To clarify something, for this part of the story at least, the POV is going to be switching between America's and England's. When it's from America's POV (as it is now), America will always refer to himself as "he" or "his", and England as "England". I hope this isn't too confusing, but if it is, please tell me. ^^;
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America slipped in and out of consciousness for the rest of the afternoon. He hated it so much. His dreams were full of fire and screaming and ropes, and he would wake up feeling as if he had to leave and do something so important. He could never remember what though, and it made no difference. England told him to stay in the house, so he would stay ( ... )

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The Most Dangerous of All - [1d/?] anonymous November 4 2012, 04:47:20 UTC
He was going to ask if this would be accomplished with a new set of clothes, but before he could ask, England had climbed into the bed and snuggled next to him. England's arms wrapped around him, and he felt warmer than he ever thought possible. He could feel England's breath on his neck, causing his skin to tingle. He focused on the beating of England's heart, oddly quick and very strong ( ... )

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The Most Dangerous of All - [2a/?] anonymous November 4 2012, 05:16:40 UTC
"[H]e immediately fell upon the good woman and ate her up in a moment, for it been more than three days since he had eaten.

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It pained England to see America so hurt. He loved the boy, and seeing him gasping in his sleep, sweating from a fever, broke his heart. Still, there was nothing to be done about it. It was America’s punishment. He had been a naughty child, trying to run away like that, and had to be taught better.

The failure of the revolution seemed to have made an imprint on the lad, and he was far more docile than he’d been in decades. In fact, England hadn’t seen him so eager for the empire’s affection since he was a small child. It warmed his heart to think that once again, America loved and wanted his big brother. He didn’t care that it took more time and effort to care for America, seeing as the boy appeared incapable of feeding, washing, or clothing himself. It brought him such joy to know that once again, he was needed by his little brother. And who knew? Perhaps if he was more careful, this time around ( ... )

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The Most Dangerous of All - [2b/?] anonymous November 4 2012, 05:19:46 UTC
It all began slowly, with American complaining of cramping in his stomach. England dismissed that almost immediately as yet another side effect from his troops forcing the colonists back into British control. The same conclusion was reached when America complained of headaches and back pains. The next strange affliction was fatigue. While America had previously been unable to care for himself, he still had been as alert and energetic as when he had been a child. Now, though, it was all England could do to get him to wake up in the morning. The lad also began to show an unusual fondness for napping, which England would have blamed on laziness if it hadn't manifested so alarmingly fast ( ... )

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The Most Dangerous of All - [2c/?] anonymous November 4 2012, 06:32:36 UTC
He was so sick. Why wasn’t it getting any better? England promised it would get better if he behaved himself, and he had! He really had ( ... )

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The Most Dangerous of All - [2d/?] anonymous November 7 2012, 23:43:09 UTC
England did not know much about the cause of nations having children. He knew his own mother, Britannia, had had him and his brothers, and that Ancient Greece and Ancient Egypt gave birth to their sons. That made sense. They were women. But male nations? He could vaguely remember his older brothers telling him that Rome and Germania gave birth to their own children, but he had chalked it up to them lying to their gullible little brother ( ... )

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Re: The Most Dangerous of All - [2d/?] anonymous November 8 2012, 20:44:50 UTC
Ooh, the infantilization of America is very creepy, anon. Pervy. I like your charcterization of England, so matter-of-fact but affectionate.

I did get a giggle at "King Louie," though. Was that on purpose? (Normally one would see it spelled "Louis.")

Thanks for sharing, anon.

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Author!Anon anonymous November 9 2012, 03:19:11 UTC
Thanks for the review!

Um, that was not on purpose, actually. ^^; A!Anon screwed it up. Thanks for letting me know, though. I'll have that corrected in the event I de-anon.

You are most welcome! Hope you continue to enjoy!

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Re: The Most Dangerous of All - [2d/?] anonymous November 9 2012, 06:45:56 UTC
Oh look, the Road to Fanfiction Hell! I'm sure there'll be plenty of company..

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The Most Dangerous of All - [2e/?] anonymous November 12 2012, 05:48:48 UTC
He was sick. He knew he was sick. But he wasn't worried anymore. England promised him he'd get better, and England was never wrong ( ... )

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Re: The Most Dangerous of All - [2e/?] anonymous November 12 2012, 22:58:30 UTC
You write very well. The quotes at the beginnings sometimes puzzle me, however.

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Author!Anon anonymous November 13 2012, 03:25:18 UTC
Thank you! And the quotes are from the Perrault and Grimm versions of Little Red Riding Hood.

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