Past-Part Fills Part 7

Feb 27, 2011 12:31



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Past-Part Fills Part Seven

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Part 12 - Turkey/Australia. "So, I need some pointers..." (1/5?) anonymous December 17 2012, 17:01:54 UTC
Original request here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=43242972#t43242972

Australia is in a relationship. For their 1st anniversary, his lover wants to act out his/her S&M fantasies, with Australia playing the role of the masochist.

However, there's a problem: Australia has been stung, poisoned, and otherwise hurt by all the critters on him that he has become desensitized to pain. He has somehow managed to go a year without telling this to his partner.

So, in order to not disappoint his beloved, Australia gets acting lessons from another nation. Whether this succeeds or not depends on the author.

Bonus: Australia's sweetheart isn't Russia."You know, it'll be a year next week," Turkey said idly, breathing out a ribbon of smoke ( ... )

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"So, I need some pointers..." (2/5?) anonymous December 17 2012, 17:03:07 UTC
Australia liked sleeping with Turkey. (See: Last night's buggering.) He liked Turkey, full stop. And Turkey's idea did sound like fun, not to mention the way his lover had grinned when he said yes, looking like the cat that got the canary.

Turkey would probably have grinned a little less if he'd known that Australia wouldn't feel half of what he was going to do to him.

Australia was not a nation given to insecurity. If he had explained to Turkey, his lover would have been disappointed, but fine with it, and they could have come up with something else (since the mood would have been thoroughly dead by then, something Australia hadn't been too keen on with Turkey's thigh where it was). But he did like the idea. It sounded like fun. So, all he had to do was play along, acting like he was in pain ( ... )

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"So, I need some pointers..." (3/5?) anonymous December 17 2012, 17:04:35 UTC
India sighed. "I mean that you must act as though your thresholds are stable -- so that you make a coherent story. You must decide what tolerances you wish to have before, and stick to them. Do not start by flinching from the lighter blows and end by ignoring them, or he will notice ( ... )

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Re: "So, I need some pointers..." (3/5?) anonymous December 17 2012, 18:24:20 UTC
Oh wow, this just excellent! I lovelovelove the voice you gave Australia, and love the little humorous interjections.

I can't wait to see the rest!!!

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Re: "So, I need some pointers..." (3/5?) anonymous December 18 2012, 03:58:36 UTC
YESSSSSSSS

Why have I not read this pairing before. Why has no one written this pairing before. It doesn't matter, I'm so happy you're writing it! I'm loving everything! Australia's interactions with the other nations, your sense of humor, mmmmm I can't wait to see Turkey tie Australia up!

You're getting me all excited, writer!anon! ;D

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Re: "So, I need some pointers..." (3/5?) anonymous December 18 2012, 04:16:37 UTC
Anon, this is great! I love the way you write. This fill is amazing and I can't wait for the next installment! I may now be hooked on this pairing

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"So, I need some pointers..." (4/6) anonymous December 22 2012, 08:53:55 UTC
They'd barely made it through the door when Australia yanked Turkey into another kiss, hot and wet and eager. Turkey growled and slammed him back into the wall before pressing against him, his hands sliding down Australia's arms, their hips grinding together. Turkey's thumb rubbed into the sensitive spot inside Australia's wrist, and Australia groaned into the kiss before nipping sharply at Turkey's lip. Turkey just chuckled and ground him into the wall again.

He wasn't going to take that lying down -- er, metaphorically lying down, because he was very firmly vertical at this point, and hot damn did Turkey's warm breath feel good on his throat when he laughed like that -- Australia hooked one leg around Turkey's knee and tugged sharply. Turkey stumbled even closer into him, pressing their bodies together from shoulders to knees, and then laughed into his open mouth. "Eager, are we?" he murmured, rubbing Australia's wrist again ( ... )

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"So, I need some pointers..." (5/6) anonymous December 22 2012, 08:55:49 UTC
Turkey chuckled in his ear, murmured something in his own language that went straight down Australia’s spine, and sat up, leaving one hand between Australia’s shoulder blades. There was the sound of hemp on wood, and that solid weight was back on top of him. “Grab the bedposts.”

Australia grabbed. Turkey shifted his weight to kneel over him, and began to wind the rope around Australia’s right wrist.

It felt…

Okay, maybe pain wasn’t an option for him, but this was going to make the evening pretty decent even if it didn’t end with Turkey’s cock up his ass. The rope wasn’t rough, but it rubbed over the outside of Australia’s wrist while the wood varnish was smooth against the heel of his palm. Turkey must have noticed his quiet gasp, because he threaded the next loop between his wrist and the post instead of just wrapping it around and mmh, the texture, the pressure… Australia’s fingers didn’t want to hold onto the post any more, and they probably didn’t need to ( ... )

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"So, I need some pointers..." (6/6) anonymous December 22 2012, 09:11:56 UTC
Australia had had enough.

“If you don’t - bloody -” he panted, “get something in me in the next ten seconds I’m gonna feed you to an emu, you - nngh!”

Rough. The drag of Turkey’s finger inside him was rougher than usual, and through the white-hot flares going off in his brain Australia realised that Turkey had shoved it in dry.

“Better?” Turkey purred in his ear, his finger already curling inside Australia’s body with the ease of familiarity.

It was -- everything felt more intense like this, the little movements magnified, and if he hadn’t been subjected to snakes and spiders and jellyfish for centuries he probably would’ve wanted it out, but as it was it just made him arch more.

“More,” he managed, because as interesting as the finger was it wasn’t Turkey’s cock. Turkey bit the back of his neck, and the two fingers that shoved back into him were slick with lube.

He didn’t bother with going to three fingers.

That felt good, too.

There was so much pressure as Turkey’s cock slid into him, opening him up, spreading him wide - ( ... )

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Re: "So, I need some pointers..." (6/6) anonymous December 23 2012, 05:59:50 UTC
Oh, this was lovely. I really, really liked this. I liked the way you wrote it, and the voice you used for Australia. Very nice A!A :D

That said, I laughed for a solid minute upon this line:

One did not survive England’s cooking by being a nervous actor.

I might be tired to have laughed like that, but that's one of the most amusing lines I've read in a while.

What an awesome fill.

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Re: "So, I need some pointers..." (6/6) anonymous December 26 2012, 15:48:31 UTC
This fill should be rated M for Manly.

I just love how your Turkey and Australia as a couple are badass, hot AND adorable.

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