Past-Part Fills Part 7

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Past-Part Fills Part Seven

Fills from past parts can go here!
Fills from the current part (part 22) MUST go in that part's post until it is full.

Link to the original request (and if an ongoing fill, any previous chapters/sections).

Don't forget to link your new fill at the fill

Comments

[Part 8] "Good Boy, There" Part 1 of 14

[anonymous]

Um, yeah, UKUS slave-fic AU. This is dedicated to my id. Warnings for smutty slave-fic and the consent issues that entails, though I will say that there are no truly unwilling partners here.

Original request (Part 8, general "slave fic" request): http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/11411.html?thread=26697875#t26697875

Good Boy, ThereThe Hunter who caught Alfred was wiry and quick. He was a fantastic shot, too; Alfred barely saw the man before he felt the filigree chain slip over his head, felt the tiny pricks of sleep-poison entering his system. He got a brief impression of haughty green eyes behind a bow still twanging with the shot, and then he went out like a light

Re: [Part 8] "Good Boy, There" Part 14 of 14

[anonymous]

Thank you! This was an amazingly hot story! I wish it would continue but--that would defeat the strength of this ending, huh?

Re: [Part 8] "Good Boy, There" Part 14 of 14

[anonymous]

I can't believe how good this is, and how awesome that it's already finished, and how awesome the finish was, too! Your characterization is amazing, and it strikes the right balance of 'yes I recognize these characters from the canon' and yet 'yes, this makes sense of how they'd be if they were in a different world', which is something I often find missing in AUs.

And the worldbuilding! Love it. So much, and yet it never feels like an infodump or extraneous.

Re: [Part 8] "Good Boy, There" Part 14 of 14

[anonymous]

wow-
I never wanted this fill to end! I do found it fastincating that Alfred refers to sex "love making" at the end there. Very tragic and I love it!

Re: [Part 8] "Good Boy, There" Part 14 of 14

[anonymous]

Oh my, this is wonderful. The ending is great since I assumed Al would stay since his anewed slave life seemed so great for him. But seeing as he had nothing to do at the palace during his seemingly short stay, it does make sense for him to escape and knowing Arthur would follow. Its a win win solution! Love everything! Whoever you are a!a I hope you write more.

Re: [Part 8] "Good Boy, There" Part 14 of 14

[anonymous]

This is sensationally good. I mean, it's crazy how good it is. I can't even explain it. You did very well with Arthur's character, and Alfred's. I love that it is told entirely from Alfred's point of view. And the ending...it's brilliant. I love the fact that it is open ending, leaving it to the reader to imagine what comes next. I can think up all sorts of things that could happen after. It's terrifically wonderful. Your descriptions are fantastic and succinct.

a!a

[anonymous]

Thank you so much! (Thank you everyone who commented; it makes my day.)

It's totally open-ended, but I think Alfred is very naive and has some surprises in store. As does Arthur. :)