Dear person who offered to beta this in the other topic… I send it to you, thanks for doing this. I´m actually posting this just so I can warn you, because I can´t comment on that entry anymore and I´m neurotic like that. Oh, and thanks everyone who commented, I love you so very much! I was very anxious and kind of hyperventilating, so yeah. Thank you again.
“We need to talk. Come to the meeting room tonight at 08 p.m. We’ll be waiting. England”The note was delivered by one of the hotel’s maids, and Alfred gave her the biggest tip the girl had ever received
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anonymous
June 10 2009, 19:05:30 UTC
Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me! Yes, I´ll follow the comic, I´ll just add description and dialogues (and some politics, just to spice things up ^_^).
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anonymous
June 7 2009, 03:30:39 UTC
I know it's more like modern-day, but I can't help but imagine this happening during the Great Depression in the 30s...and that being the reason Alfred held on so tight to his isolationism and refused to enter the war right away.
Author!anon here
anonymous
June 10 2009, 19:14:47 UTC
O.O
I hadn't thought about it that way... it makes sense, doesn’t it? In the later chapters they’ll mention Afghanistan and Iraq, but or now it could be in the 30’s… that’s interesting!
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anonymous
June 9 2009, 02:19:11 UTC
Oh, author!anon! I admit when I first saw that you planned to write a fill based on the comic, I wasn't sure I wanted to read it because I think the comic is that brilliant--but I'm so glad I took a chance, because this is marvelous so far. Alfred's optimism, even in the worst of times (which happens to be a quality I adore, where others think it makes him a fool) is shining through so clearly and so heartbreaking. And of course Matthew--well, Matthew is love, isn't he?
Really, really looking forward to more. Thank you for deciding to do this! ♥
Author!anon here
anonymous
June 10 2009, 19:23:00 UTC
Yes, the comic *is* brilliant, and probably won’t live it up to it, but I hope it will at least be entertaining... thanks so much for giving it a chance. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
(I love Alfred’s optimism… I think it’s what gets him trough his problems, and. Well. He’ll need it)
Taste of Revenge [4/?]
anonymous
June 11 2009, 04:54:21 UTC
Erm. I send it to the person who offered to beta, but I didn’t hear from her (or him. Why do I always assume is a girl?) and, like I said, I’m a very neurotic person, so I decided to post anyway. Sorry about that. Ç_Ç
SO. You’ll notice I added some stuff- mostly dialogue - but I tried to stick with the comic. I know it was supposed to be Ivan’s house, but the G20 meeting seemed too good to miss, so I moved the whole thing to London. It didn’t change much. The conference center was near enough to go by walk, if he wanted to, and considering he was leaving so early he would probably make it on time. Still, it was better to avoid any risk. He took a cab right by the hotel’s door
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Taste of Revenge [7/?]
anonymous
June 11 2009, 05:03:54 UTC
“Not that he doesn’t deserve it”, Francis mumbled “Right, America?”
Ivan uncovered his mouth, but Alfred didn’t even try to answer. He couldn’t waste time, not when every second of air was precious. Francis smiled at him, disdain clear in his blue eyes, shaking his head.
Arthur’s hand was still between his legs, his fingers running over Alfred’s pants. He had a distant memory of choosing not to change into his denims because- why was that anyway? He could feel the shame and fear in the pit of his stomach, because Arthur was pinching and pulling the fabric and he could feel his touch and wanted to cross his legs but it was impossible, and this-
-this was it, wasn't it? This was the punishment they had planned for him. He heard the sound of the scissors and blushed, because they wouldn’t even bother to undress him. They’d just uncover the hole they planned to use.
“Hand me the tape”, Arthur said, and Alfred tried to glare at him. Why, he wanted to ask, why are you doing this to me? But then Ivan pushed him forward, almost making
( ... )
ARTIST!ANON IS IMPRESSED!!
anonymous
June 11 2009, 05:27:22 UTC
oh author!anon, you wrote this alot more deeper than I did! I'm glad you asked if you could do this cause it's totally what my comic lacked. I should uh ... stop getting distracted and draw the next page haha
Author!anon here
anonymous
June 11 2009, 19:41:46 UTC
I´m so glad you enjoyed it, especially because there's no way in hell I could make it as hot as your art. I look at it while I write to get the dialogues and the inspiration, and I don´t think it´s possible to match all the emotion and intensity and hottness of everything. =)
So... please give us the next page! *kills the distraction*
First part: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=11333058#t11333058
Dear person who offered to beta this in the other topic… I send it to you, thanks for doing this. I´m actually posting this just so I can warn you, because I can´t comment on that entry anymore and I´m neurotic like that. Oh, and thanks everyone who commented, I love you so very much! I was very anxious and kind of hyperventilating, so yeah. Thank you again.
“We need to talk. Come to the meeting room tonight at 08 p.m.
We’ll be waiting.
England”The note was delivered by one of the hotel’s maids, and Alfred gave her the biggest tip the girl had ever received ( ... )
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I know where this is going and yet it has me in anticipation. Are you going to follow the comic exactly? Can't wait for more.
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I hadn't thought about it that way... it makes sense, doesn’t it? In the later chapters they’ll mention Afghanistan and Iraq, but or now it could be in the 30’s… that’s interesting!
Thanks for reading it!
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Really, really looking forward to more. Thank you for deciding to do this! ♥
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(I love Alfred’s optimism… I think it’s what gets him trough his problems, and. Well. He’ll need it)
Thanks again for reading it!
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SO. You’ll notice I added some stuff- mostly dialogue - but I tried to stick with the comic. I know it was supposed to be Ivan’s house, but the G20 meeting seemed too good to miss, so I moved the whole thing to London. It didn’t change much.
The conference center was near enough to go by walk, if he wanted to, and considering he was leaving so early he would probably make it on time. Still, it was better to avoid any risk. He took a cab right by the hotel’s door ( ... )
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Ivan uncovered his mouth, but Alfred didn’t even try to answer. He couldn’t waste time, not when every second of air was precious. Francis smiled at him, disdain clear in his blue eyes, shaking his head.
Arthur’s hand was still between his legs, his fingers running over Alfred’s pants. He had a distant memory of choosing not to change into his denims because- why was that anyway? He could feel the shame and fear in the pit of his stomach, because Arthur was pinching and pulling the fabric and he could feel his touch and wanted to cross his legs but it was impossible, and this-
-this was it, wasn't it? This was the punishment they had planned for him. He heard the sound of the scissors and blushed, because they wouldn’t even bother to undress him. They’d just uncover the hole they planned to use.
“Hand me the tape”, Arthur said, and Alfred tried to glare at him. Why, he wanted to ask, why are you doing this to me? But then Ivan pushed him forward, almost making ( ... )
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So... please give us the next page! *kills the distraction*
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Normally I hate Arthur on top!
But this...this is just...
I think I just orgasmed.
reCaptcha: kidnap mocks
Alfred you should just shut your mouth and take it already!
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