Dear person who offered to beta this in the other topic… I send it to you, thanks for doing this. I´m actually posting this just so I can warn you, because I can´t comment on that entry anymore and I´m neurotic like that. Oh, and thanks everyone who commented, I love you so very much! I was very anxious and kind of hyperventilating, so yeah. Thank you again.
“We need to talk. Come to the meeting room tonight at 08 p.m. We’ll be waiting. England”The note was delivered by one of the hotel’s maids, and Alfred gave her the biggest tip the girl had ever received
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Re: Taste of Revenge [7/?]
anonymous
June 15 2009, 22:42:20 UTC
I actually started crying, authornon. (why is this anon such an emotional twit? who knows) Just -- fuck -- Alfred, he is such a hero and god this all and hnnghhh ; ______;
Taste of Revenge [8/?]
anonymous
June 20 2009, 03:31:51 UTC
Thank you so much for your comments, guys! It’s really important to me to know what you’re thinking. This is harder than I thought - I blame artist!anon and her uber mad skillz. ***
“You can do the honors,” Francis said “Don’t go easy on him.”
“I’m not going easy on him. Look, he’s already glaring at me
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Taste of Revenge [9/?]
anonymous
June 20 2009, 03:34:06 UTC
He bended over and now his face was right above Alfred's, and Alfred had a panoramic view of his open mouth, his bright eyes, his face contorted in pleasure.
He turned so he wouldn't see Arthur panting because he had done- something, because some spasm of his had tightened his hole or whatever, why was Arthur enjoying this, he had punished Alfred before and it was never like this and he was never this fucking glad about it and Arthur came closer to his face and he closed his eyes to pretend he was anywhere but here, and then
( ... )
Re: Taste of Revenge [9/?]
anonymous
June 21 2009, 01:49:55 UTC
Anon is far, far too hard on herself. There were some spelling errors that had more to do with your choice of words.
Anyway, this is wonderful! In a completely heartbreaking way, of course. Just seeing America like this breaks my heart. Not enough for me to not want more, but it's depressing none the less. Just seeing America have such strong hopes, only for them to come crashing down hurts. Just like it's supposed to.
Taste of Revenge [10/?]
anonymous
July 2 2009, 19:25:33 UTC
Skip this one if you don’t like references to 11/9. Just saying. Don’t ask me what I’m doing, I don’t even know anymore. Oh, and thanks so much to everyone who commented, it means a lot to me. I hope there isn’t many mistakes this time…
“I can't get up.”
He didn't want to say please. Not again.
“A- Arthur? I can’t-”
Arthur still wasn't looking at him:
“France? Would you like to be next?”
And then for a second Alfred’s breath stalled and he couldn't make it start again. He hadn't- hadn't seen this coming, not this. He’d thought his humiliation would be punishment enough, he never thought Arthur would- that somebody else would- this wasn't right, this wasn't right-“Sure,” Francis said, smiling. Alfred tried to get up, supporting his weight on his bound arms
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Re: Taste of Revenge [11/?]
anonymous
July 3 2009, 02:17:13 UTC
Christ, some of this makes me want to cry, anon. You're doing great! Not only are you adding onto the hotness of the comic, but you're going with the original fill! Remember, the OP (who is not me, by the way) requested that everyone be shown to be raging hypocrites. And poor Alfred, he's just confused and alone and in pain. ;_; You, my good anon, rock.
Re: Taste of Revenge [11/?]
anonymous
July 3 2009, 21:47:19 UTC
Thank you so much for saying this! Yes, I remember the hipocrites part and I almost mentioned in the note, but then I thought I´d be telling people how to read it or something, and well. I´m just relieved that came across. Thanks again! ^^
Artist!Anon here ....
anonymous
July 3 2009, 04:02:06 UTC
totally agrees with above anon! :D I'm glad to see you continuing this! I'm kinda glad you put 9/11 in this since it kinda adds to the recession and our ever growing National Debt. Also, the way you wrote Feli in this is totally perfect!! I'm totally gonna redraw the whole thing after I'm done, and I'll most likely follow your fic more cause it's that good 8D
Re: Artist!Anon here ....
anonymous
July 3 2009, 05:03:15 UTC
haha yeah, I'll most likely redraw it. I regret not putting enough effort in the first couple of pages. Heck, if I get enough pages I might consider making it a book. Especially if that sequel ever like happens :D
AuthorAnon here.
anonymous
July 3 2009, 21:13:11 UTC
OMG REALLY?
I feel so honored! Really, you made my day, thank you so much!
(I was afraid 9/11 would end up being too offensive, but, like you said, it added a lot to what America´s facing today so I had to at least mention it. I'm glad it worked.^^)
First part: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=11333058#t11333058
Dear person who offered to beta this in the other topic… I send it to you, thanks for doing this. I´m actually posting this just so I can warn you, because I can´t comment on that entry anymore and I´m neurotic like that. Oh, and thanks everyone who commented, I love you so very much! I was very anxious and kind of hyperventilating, so yeah. Thank you again.
“We need to talk. Come to the meeting room tonight at 08 p.m.
We’ll be waiting.
England”The note was delivered by one of the hotel’s maids, and Alfred gave her the biggest tip the girl had ever received ( ... )
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Just -- fuck -- Alfred, he is such a hero and god this all and hnnghhh
; ______;
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TAKE IT AMERICA.
:DDDDDD
*drool*
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“You can do the honors,” Francis said “Don’t go easy on him.”
“I’m not going easy on him. Look, he’s already glaring at me ( ... )
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He turned so he wouldn't see Arthur panting because he had done- something, because some spasm of his had tightened his hole or whatever, why was Arthur enjoying this, he had punished Alfred before and it was never like this and he was never this fucking glad about it and Arthur came closer to his face and he closed his eyes to pretend he was anywhere but here, and then ( ... )
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Anyway, this is wonderful! In a completely heartbreaking way, of course. Just seeing America like this breaks my heart. Not enough for me to not want more, but it's depressing none the less. Just seeing America have such strong hopes, only for them to come crashing down hurts. Just like it's supposed to.
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this is your fault anon ; ___;
I love this fic so much
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Just the thought of all the countries sitting their and watching while England...
fapfapfap
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“I can't get up.”
He didn't want to say please. Not again.
“A- Arthur? I can’t-”
Arthur still wasn't looking at him:
“France? Would you like to be next?”
And then for a second Alfred’s breath stalled and he couldn't make it start again. He hadn't- hadn't seen this coming, not this. He’d thought his humiliation would be punishment enough, he never thought Arthur would- that somebody else would- this wasn't right, this wasn't right-“Sure,” Francis said, smiling. Alfred tried to get up, supporting his weight on his bound arms ( ... )
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“First question,” Francis said “How many people died in the two towers attack?”
“I-”
“Yes, you do. You probably know their names. How many ( ... )
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I'm glad to see you continuing this! I'm kinda glad you put 9/11 in this since it kinda adds to the recession and our ever growing National Debt. Also, the way you wrote Feli in this is totally perfect!! I'm totally gonna redraw the whole thing after I'm done, and I'll most likely follow your fic more cause it's that good 8D
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Y-you're going to re-draw it to match the fic!? Oh, anon, you're spoiling us.
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I feel so honored! Really, you made my day, thank you so much!
(I was afraid 9/11 would end up being too offensive, but, like you said, it added a lot to what America´s facing today so I had to at least mention it. I'm glad it worked.^^)
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