Dear person who offered to beta this in the other topic… I send it to you, thanks for doing this. I´m actually posting this just so I can warn you, because I can´t comment on that entry anymore and I´m neurotic like that. Oh, and thanks everyone who commented, I love you so very much! I was very anxious and kind of hyperventilating, so yeah. Thank you again.
“We need to talk. Come to the meeting room tonight at 08 p.m. We’ll be waiting. England”The note was delivered by one of the hotel’s maids, and Alfred gave her the biggest tip the girl had ever received
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OP is always, always late
anonymous
July 7 2009, 16:26:18 UTC
First, I need to apologise for not being around very much. Then, I need to commend you on what an excellent fill you have going on here. I love it. I love that it's complementing artist!anon's drool-worthy art, and I love the expansion of the story that can probably only be done in writing.
I love the threat about the scissors, perhaps a little too much to be normal, but, haha, haven't I already proven myself a pervert for requesting this in the first place?
Taste of Revenge [12/?]
anonymous
July 17 2009, 02:25:35 UTC
So he did it again, licking him carefully, letting Feliciano’s moans guide him. Feliciano kept his hand on Alfred’s hair, running his fingers through each lock and the rogue curl that he could never tame, not pulling, not hurting, actually caressing his hair. The- the best lovers are Italians, someone had told him that in other life, before this, this madness, and Alfred tried to focus on that, tried to forget Francis’ hard thrusts and Feliciano’s cock inside his mouth, to focus only on the soft caress of those fingers on his head.
A harsh voice burst his bubble, brought him back to earth:
“Hey, make room for me,” Romano was saying. Feliciano opened his eyes, surprised, and Alfred- Alfred couldn’t do a thing, but he almost cringed when Romano looked down on him, because he had never seem so much contempt, not even here, it was like- like Romano found him utterly worthless. “If he can shove all those burgers in his mouth, I’m sure he can take both of us. Right, America
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Taste of Revenge [13/?]
anonymous
July 17 2009, 02:28:43 UTC
Alfred could still hear Romano’s words inside his head, and, and somehow, somehow he expected to be humiliated and, and everything, but that was different, that was embarrassment more than shame, and he couldn’t help but resent it. Romano didn’t have to say those awful things in front of everyone, he didn’t!
It was the worst, this, the worst thing they had done to him so far, and he didn’t want to think about it. Francis was still pushing inside him, in, out, in and out, and both Italies were kissing above his head and now he knew he was hard he couldn’t forget this either, couldn’t ignore the fact he was hard and he was getting closer and closer- oh God, he thought, oh God, fuck, fuck why is this happening to me, and he didn’t know what were those jolts of pleasure in the middle of the pain and shame, it hadn’t faded, he was still hurting, he was, so why was he hard, he didn’t want this, oh God-“Shit,” Francis grunted “I’m coming”, and Romano was too, and it took Alfred a few precious seconds to realize two people were about to cum
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First part: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=11333058#t11333058
Dear person who offered to beta this in the other topic… I send it to you, thanks for doing this. I´m actually posting this just so I can warn you, because I can´t comment on that entry anymore and I´m neurotic like that. Oh, and thanks everyone who commented, I love you so very much! I was very anxious and kind of hyperventilating, so yeah. Thank you again.
“We need to talk. Come to the meeting room tonight at 08 p.m.
We’ll be waiting.
England”The note was delivered by one of the hotel’s maids, and Alfred gave her the biggest tip the girl had ever received ( ... )
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I love the threat about the scissors, perhaps a little too much to be normal, but, haha, haven't I already proven myself a pervert for requesting this in the first place?
I feel utterly spoilt. *blows kisses*
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reCAPTCHA: and songs. O_O Does captcha want me to make the sequel into a musical?
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A harsh voice burst his bubble, brought him back to earth:
“Hey, make room for me,” Romano was saying. Feliciano opened his eyes, surprised, and Alfred- Alfred couldn’t do a thing, but he almost cringed when Romano looked down on him, because he had never seem so much contempt, not even here, it was like- like Romano found him utterly worthless. “If he can shove all those burgers in his mouth, I’m sure he can take both of us. Right, America ( ... )
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It was the worst, this, the worst thing they had done to him so far, and he didn’t want to think about it. Francis was still pushing inside him, in, out, in and out, and both Italies were kissing above his head and now he knew he was hard he couldn’t forget this either, couldn’t ignore the fact he was hard and he was getting closer and closer- oh God, he thought, oh God, fuck, fuck why is this happening to me, and he didn’t know what were those jolts of pleasure in the middle of the pain and shame, it hadn’t faded, he was still hurting, he was, so why was he hard, he didn’t want this, oh God-“Shit,” Francis grunted “I’m coming”, and Romano was too, and it took Alfred a few precious seconds to realize two people were about to cum ( ... )
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Alfred so deserves vengance. Which is why I don't feel any guilt reading the vengance fics.
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Like I am helplessly watching someone...
I should go read more revenge fics, it eases my guilt.
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