Title: In the Hall of the Mountain King Author: heyginger Prompt: Pete/Patrick, being spit on Rating: NC-17 Word Count: 3500-ish Summary: Pete never tells anyone, no one, never.
I can't stand this ship, as you obviously know, but even I can tell you that this is a brilliantly executed piece and even with all your frustrations surrounding it, it turned out exactly as I think it should have done.
It has so much potential to just be plain unpleasant, but you've articulated it from Pete's POV in such a way that it does make sense for him. Although probably not for me. >.>
The changes we discussed most recently are also a vast improvement.
I'm so ridiculously late with replying to this, but thank you so much. I never would have finished this fic without you, and now that some time has passed and I've reread it with a bit of distance, I actually like the story, and I know that wouldn't have happened without you, so. Thanks! <33
This is really wonderful. I love how Pete it is, quietly and desperately. And Patrick is just right--unsettling and present enough to get through Pete's panic to his bug collection (awesome metaphor).
Plus, it's fucking hot.
If the sounding fic made the challenge for you, this fic makes it for me. Exactly the Pete/Patrick (kink, but that's largely incidental) fic I always wanted but could never write myself. Perfect. Thank you.
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It has so much potential to just be plain unpleasant, but you've articulated it from Pete's POV in such a way that it does make sense for him. Although probably not for me. >.>
The changes we discussed most recently are also a vast improvement.
Well done, hon. ♥
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You really did an awesome job with a very difficult subject.
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This is really wonderful. I love how Pete it is, quietly and desperately. And Patrick is just right--unsettling and present enough to get through Pete's panic to his bug collection (awesome metaphor).
Plus, it's fucking hot.
If the sounding fic made the challenge for you, this fic makes it for me. Exactly the Pete/Patrick (kink, but that's largely incidental) fic I always wanted but could never write myself. Perfect. Thank you.
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This is the bestest little fandom ever. Great story.
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