Fic: In the Hall of the Mountain King (1/1)

Feb 07, 2009 22:15

Title: In the Hall of the Mountain King
Author: heyginger
Prompt: Pete/Patrick, being spit on
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3500-ish
Summary: Pete never tells anyone, no one, never.

To be one's self is to slay one's self. )

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rosiedoes February 16 2009, 18:00:45 UTC
I can't stand this ship, as you obviously know, but even I can tell you that this is a brilliantly executed piece and even with all your frustrations surrounding it, it turned out exactly as I think it should have done.

It has so much potential to just be plain unpleasant, but you've articulated it from Pete's POV in such a way that it does make sense for him. Although probably not for me. >.>

The changes we discussed most recently are also a vast improvement.

Well done, hon. ♥

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heyginger April 5 2009, 16:52:19 UTC
I'm so ridiculously late with replying to this, but thank you so much. I never would have finished this fic without you, and now that some time has passed and I've reread it with a bit of distance, I actually like the story, and I know that wouldn't have happened without you, so. Thanks! <33

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rosiedoes April 5 2009, 16:54:27 UTC
No problem, hon. I'd do it again any time. :) *hugs*

You really did an awesome job with a very difficult subject.

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azurejay February 16 2009, 19:37:56 UTC
Canon, canon, canon. \o/

This is really wonderful. I love how Pete it is, quietly and desperately. And Patrick is just right--unsettling and present enough to get through Pete's panic to his bug collection (awesome metaphor).

Plus, it's fucking hot.

If the sounding fic made the challenge for you, this fic makes it for me. Exactly the Pete/Patrick (kink, but that's largely incidental) fic I always wanted but could never write myself. Perfect. Thank you.

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heyginger April 5 2009, 16:51:06 UTC
I'm glad you liked it--I was worried about if you would, so. Thank you! <33

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emmuzka February 16 2009, 20:53:05 UTC
Hot and very complicated, thank you for this :)

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heyginger April 5 2009, 16:49:10 UTC
Hot and complicated is a great compliment! Thanks so much!

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untelling February 16 2009, 21:31:12 UTC
Wow. Just - wow. I wasn't sure how this would work when I read the header info, but it does. It just does.

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dirtypmaprez February 17 2009, 04:37:42 UTC
Hi. You wrote kink porn and named it after the best song from Peer Gynt.

This is the bestest little fandom ever. Great story.

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heyginger April 5 2009, 16:48:43 UTC
I love Peer Gynt! Thanks!

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