Comments | heygotcha: wrong

16littleseconds in heygotcha

wrong

Sep 30, 2010 19:28

wrong
eleven/amy, doctor who.
1,204 words, pg-13.
summary: amy's lost and scared and the doctor knows that it's wrong, but he can't stop himself.

( Wrong, wrong, wrong, the word echoes in his mind, but his body doesn’t respond. )

pairing: eleven/amy, rating: pg-13, language: english, fandom: doctor who

Comments 13

cutiewitchgirl September 30 2010, 20:21:41 UTC

Really liked this. Thanks for writing :)

16littleseconds October 1 2010, 11:02:55 UTC

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

tnbella October 1 2010, 01:00:51 UTC

This was fantastic! I love the little stories that go with the pictures. <3

16littleseconds October 1 2010, 11:03:47 UTC

Thanks a lot! I always enjoy photo prompts because ideas always come to my mind easily to write about them! :) And I also like that you can associate a bit of story with a picture!

tasty_kate October 1 2010, 03:11:44 UTC

:'(
How bitter-sweet... And I didn't even consider the last picture to be a cannon-compliant. Well done.

16littleseconds October 1 2010, 11:04:51 UTC

Thanks a lot for your comment! :)

lethal_paine October 1 2010, 11:31:26 UTC

Beautiful! Between the pictures and all else everything seemed to fit in so well together. Thank you for sharing! I hope to see more!

16littleseconds October 1 2010, 15:59:40 UTC

Thanks a lot for this sweet comment!
I'll write more Eleven/Amy fics for sure in the future! :)

ahedonia October 6 2010, 09:17:32 UTC

Lovely mood to this, and I liked the Doctor's ambivalence about it all: telling her, kissing her, "losing" her. Very nice.

16littleseconds October 6 2010, 13:02:20 UTC

Thanks a lot for your comment, glad you liked this! :)