"Angels With Two Faces", Chapter Four

Sep 18, 2009 15:07

Title: Angels With Two Faces
Chapter: 4/??
Fandom: Arashi
Character, Pairing(s): none
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence and language
Summary: "I'm Kazu Ninomiya. I'm 26 years old, and I'm here to catch a murderer. Let me tell you about Los Angeles."

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[fic] angels with two faces

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cris_kanaschiro September 18 2009, 21:01:29 UTC
Love this crime scenario, their personalities, lvoe everything!
But I miss Ohno... <3
Thank you for sharing!!

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katmillia September 18 2009, 21:09:07 UTC
lol Ohno pops up now and then- we promise he'll continue to do so ;) We are very glad you are enjoying this crazy fic! <3 <3 And thank you so much for commenting!

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cris_kanaschiro September 19 2009, 02:11:50 UTC
I'm really sorry for asking this but... are there going to have pairings?
Really sorry for asking this, but I'm pretty curious!
And I can't wait for more Doc Ohno! <3

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katmillia September 19 2009, 02:14:48 UTC
There will be at least one pairing, I can give you that but no further information will I reveal! <3

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saku062 September 18 2009, 21:38:08 UTC
Sorry for not commenting on the last chapter ^^"
I printed it and read it when I had free time (and was taking notes, so people around thought I was crazy XD)

So the pairing will be Matsumiya and (hopefully) Sakuraiba? n_n

Okayyy! About the "case", humm I still have no clue, but srangely while reading the part with Nakai at the radio station, I thought "aaah~ it would be nice, if Kokubun was in this story!!" (Yeah I know, that's nothing to do with the "case" XD)

While reading, the previous chapter, I thought that maybe the murderer was in fact a cop, and now I see that Sho's close from one of the suspects...I really hope he's not the criminal >.<

Maybe I'm too much paranoiac but...the case with the family doesn't seem so innocent or not connected...Well, we'll see n_n

A great chapter!! I'm becoming more and more fond of this story (though, I'm a bit disappointed there's no Sakumoto in this one XDD But Sakuraiba is really good *_*)

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katmillia September 18 2009, 21:45:04 UTC
Oh no worries about not commenting! I can't believe you printed this out, hahahaha that's devotion, I have to say! :)

I can't really say much because we are staunchly refusing to comment on anything regarding the case (much like how cops deal with the press) but more will be revealed soon! <3

Thank youuuuu for reading and commenting. xD We looove your feedback so much!

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daisuki_dkzen September 18 2009, 22:01:14 UTC
i like the building dynamics/tension between nino and jun: the grudging respect that is forming. heh, im sure they hate it just as much. <3

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katmillia September 18 2009, 22:05:16 UTC
Thank you! (haha I started writing this with my language bar on Japanese and wondered why it looked so funny, doh) The dynamics between them are fun. :) They know how to push each other's buttons so well! <3

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b00kw0rm79 September 18 2009, 22:07:25 UTC
Oooh, I hope they get a break in their case soon.

I've recently taken up golf. The whole golf scene brought back memories of my horrible grip and swing. I'm at Jun's level currently. It was HILARIOUS when he hit Nino.

I love how Nino has begun to loosen up in the story. Not just with Jun, but with the others he interacts. At first I had the feeling he was stiff. To me he was 'the stiff FBI man' and now you've brought out his playfulness and devilishness.

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katmillia September 18 2009, 22:11:08 UTC
Hahaha don't let Nino hear anything about loosening up- he's staunchly resisting that idea. ;)

Golf is awesome! I played golf for 4 years in high school, so writing the scene was very fun. xD Hilariously enough, Aiba was instructing Jun to grip as I do, as the pro shop owner instructed me told me. ;)

<3 <3 Thank you soooo much for reading and commenting! We are so grateful for your support~~

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madisonfink September 18 2009, 22:17:37 UTC
Ah~ I love it, mhmmm maybe some Matsumiya rabu would be delicious XD

Can't wait till you update again.

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katmillia September 18 2009, 22:19:29 UTC
lol Matsumiya is always a nice treat, isn't it? xD xD

Thank youuuu for reading and being fantastic! <3

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madisonfink September 18 2009, 22:21:27 UTC
No no, thank you for being fabulous~~

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