[fic: drabble] SHINee » blue is just a fairytale

[hisa_cake]

Title: blue is just a fairytale
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Wordcount: 102
Summary: Reality is not in photographs.
Disclaimer: I do not own Taemin, least of all his mother. That would just be sick.

Comments

[jaeminnie]

How old is Taemin supposed to be here, his current age? If he's supposed to be any younger than 13, I don't think he'd say "It...doesn't look as beautiful and breathtaking in reality"; the speech would be too sophisticated for him.

This is pretty nice. I feel like maybe something is missing from the end, like maybe Taem should turn back to the window and look out of it and realize/think something else, but it's also fine like this.

[hisa_cake]

I started writing a journal entry from his POV after this, and I think I set the date as October 2010? So uh, 17. I might change the date at which this is occurring, though, since I'm re-hauling the plot a bit.

need to do laundry now, will reply fully later bye

[hisa_cake]

*trying not to think about the two longass fucking documents I have to analyze later*

Um, I dunno, I think it'd be kind of awkward if I added something else with Taemin at the end, at least with how I continued in a journal entry. Uh, okay, I haven't posted the rest of this, but yeah. Um. okay I'm not making sense anymore D8 *runs away to do global shit*

[jaeminnie]

Yes, focus on Stolarsky, assuming that's your Global homework. You can drabble over intersession. :D

[kinomoto_narika]

Aww. All his hopes of beauty are shattered by muddy American water. D=