[fic: oneshot] SHINee » we are forever

[hisa_cake]

title: we are forever
author: hisa-cake
fandom: SHINee
pairing: OT5, I guess? Onew with everyone (implied), a lot of KeyHo more like Key mothering Minho, slight JongTae
rating: PG-13
wordcount: 894
summary: Life after death, of forgotten passions, of love, of healing.
disclaimer: Boys are the slaves of SM. Man, I hope they're resting well.

miscellania:

Comments

[jaeminnie]

lee jinki
december 1989 - may 2012
shining shinee imnida, forever

AJDS;FASF START BY BREAKING YOUR READERS' HEARTS, WHY DON'T YOU??

Okay, so now that I've actually read the whole fic. I can see all of this playing out in real life if Onew really were to die young :( But that's just a horrible thought, so I think I'll go and read some fluff so I can stop feeling all "D:" about SHINee.

(♥)

[hisa_cake]

SORRY -shot- I TOLD YOU DEATHFIC SOUNDED ALLURING.

Did it work, though, the death? I was trying to stray away from the usual "oh you died, you're not here anymore, i'm so sad, i spend all day crying and i don't know what to do without you" kind of thing. Originally it was supposed to be just OnTae, only Taem reminiscing and stuff, but I ended up including the others once I started wondering how the others would cope with his death. and because I like OT5 too much

[hisa_cake]

ew

*but I ended up including the others once I started wondering how they would cope

/anti-repetitionfreak

[hisa_cake]

Oh, and yes, I really was in disbelief that Onew was already dead (augh, stops thinking about it :<) at the start of the story.

Just because I wrote so? xD Ah, the power of words. If it's any consolation, I'll admit to you that I came close to crying while writing the thing.

[intoxicatedbrat]

Hello, random person from Ontae Love passing by.

Just to let you know, I am in love with this fic.
I like the style you used here. The run-ons and abscence of caps.. they fit.

And beautiful writing. You made me weep both times when I read twice.
Kudos! :D

[hisa_cake]

ajkswghbgftekhsghy ;_;

sorry, I'm kind of dead from the praise. Just...it makes me happy to know that people like it and are crying, too. Thank you so much ♥

[romanticgraze]

Oh my heart.
That was beautiful. ;___; I'm holding back my tears btw. I don't want my dad to look at me like i'm crazy right now lol.
I love how it's Taeminnie's pov and then you add in an actual comment from who he's talking about.

[hisa_cake]

lol I always have trouble holding back tears when reading really sad fic or watching a sad drama (scene) or something. My PC is in the living room and in full view of anyone who passes by; anyone who sits on the couch and watches TV can see exactly what I'm doing on the computer. -_- I need a laptop and my own room so I fangirl and cry without constantly being stared at :C

Yeah, I thought it'd be interesting to have it from Taem's POV since he's the youngest and all. although MKMF has proved to all of us that Key breaks down so much easier akjfhajkef ♥ :D

Thank you so much for reading~ x)

And random appearance of my bias here, but god I want Onew staring at me like that, the way he is in your icon. /fangirldreams

[romanticgraze]

*nods* I have that problem with dramas. I can never hold them back. lol. I was in my living room with my laptop and my dad sitting close by so xD;;;

jkfsgjakag Key's precious. ♥

=D

Your bias is my bias. He gives out the most loving looks ever. ♥ I loveee that pic. /fangirldreams with you.

[bambayahh]

absolutely breathtaking :O
everything about this fic was lovely and omg "Stand By Me" quote(?)/reference(?) LOL.

Anyways, i loved this. your writing is absolutely beautiful && i love how you showed how Jinki's death affected everyone else :D

[hisa_cake]

cute!Junsu is pulling me away from my stupid Napoleon studies, not that I'm actually doing them, but. D:

lol I wasn't even sure about putting the "Stand By Me" quote there considering that bit is in Engrish. XD I keep seeing different versions of it, though; I just looked it up again and another site says "Together make it love, forever making you smile" which makes a lot more sense. I dunno, it's kind of hard to tell with Onew's accent, haha. I might change it, though, just for flow purposes.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it :)

[bambayahh]

HAHA xDD

I seriously always thought it was "Together making love, Forever making your smile" LOL. Until after i read this, i finally decided to go look up the lyrisc. and found what you had written in your fic.

BLECK~ Engrish is ♥ so it doesn't matter cause no one can understand it anyways xD

[hisa_cake]

My test is tomorrow, I still haven't started studying, and I'm staring at cute!Junsu again. WHY SO ADORABLE, SU D8

"Together making love" HAHAHAHAHA. HAHAHA. Oh, God. XD

Engrish always makes me laugh :D "The SHINee World" is especially funny; I thought the "I wanna get you in this party" line was "I wanna get you in this body" at first LOL

[parksoobyung]

sniff.
good thing my roommate isn't here as I read this.
she would've been seriously alarmed if I suddenly
burst out crying (it happened, y'know)

:]

thank you. it was wonderful. i needed a good cry.

[hisa_cake]

LOL I'll just apologize in the case that she WAS there. Sorry. xD

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :3