Ok, I've made slight revisions in the first part of chapter one and added the rest of the chapter where Ylana meets the crew.

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I've skipped a good bt of time here. This is where my two main protangoists finally meet. There will be more to this chapter. Lots more. Will post as I finish it.

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What I will be doing is posting book sections. I'll try to keep the links up to all the current versions, so you can read what I've written so far. BTW way not working title for the book as yet. Any good suggestions would be helpful ( Read more... )