Concrit Post 17

[hmd_me]

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[blueshocks]

sixwordstories
Elle Bishopblueshocks/tookthemaway
Bela Talbot insilksheets
Gretchen Burg jumppushfall
Sandra Bennet mrmugglesbitch
John Casey survived3wars
Captain Hammer lovingmetodeath
Sylar specialmonster
Gabriel Gray justgabriel
Barbara Gordon formerlybatgirl
Jessica Hamby virginvampire

I love jizzing as much as everyone but if anyone had any actually constructive crit, I'd love that too.

[cuzitswrong]

Mmmm I love you so much and I feel like I can say more things to you this time! Haha. Yay.

First of all, I have to tell you that your Captain Hammer is the most perfect characterization I have ever seen. You are so funny, seriously. I still crack up anytime threads of his come to mind. Haha you made me change my mind about playing him at Shana's game because... you will always be my forever Hammer. ;___;

I really love how ... tough your Elle is. I think she's the toughest of all the Elles in Dean's life, and it's amazing how different her experiences make her feel to me.

Now that I've watched Chuck I am in awe of your Casey and ... love you for playing him. He's such a very special boy lmfao. But anyways, what I saw was like... what I expected to see from playing with you so that's a super good sign.

I'm really excited for this Bela/Dean/Bruce log, I'm so sorry I've been slow this week, haha, but I will get on that and it will be epic. ;_;

ILU you are a sweetheart, and I'm so glad we're friends.

[blueshocks]

Thank you so much. Captain Hammer is...my special boy and I'm glad he amuses the rest of the world as much as he does me. I need to post for him soon with the whole trying to kill Micheal thing. I should do that. /adds to to-do list.

I'm so glad you like my Elle, I worry about her constantly with how she's developed in BNW so I'm glad you like her.

Casey is my muse I worry about the most because he's so not my type and I just fear I'm bastardizing him, so I'm glad my representation of him gave you accurate expectations for the show.

I'm super excited for Bruce/Bela/Dean logtimes too. You have no idea. I've been slow this week too, don't worry bb. I think we all have been.

ILU and I'm glad you're my friend too <3

[other_sights]

I have crit.

You're not playing John Casey outside a DR. THIS SHOULD BE REMEDIED.

[survived3wars]

I've still be muse testing him a lot so that's the main reason why I haven't attempted him in a game.

[other_sights]

Hah, I'm sorry for coming off overly serious there. This account tends to do that, fff.

I admire your giving him a go. He's a difficult but wonderful character, and I'd love to see whatever you do with him.

[survived3wars]

No worries, I figured it was one of the "joking serious" sort of statements.

I've been debating playing in an actual game at some point. He's fun, and a challenge which always nice to play with.

[other_sights]

I really should cut down on doing that to unsuspecting strangers.

I've been marathoning the series with a friend, and I'm in love. Here's to hoping you find something to your liking?

[survived3wars]

It's all good.

It's an amazing series. I'm sure I'll find something for him eventually. Thank you.

[electrocutesy]

HEY BB. I DON'T REALLY UNDERSTAND HOW I COULD CRIT YOU BUT I'M COMMENTING ANYWAY

[blueshocks]

I'm just...glad you love them both because I often feel like I do way, way better with Gabriel than I do with Sylar. How does that even begin to make sense? They're the same person. And yet I still feel that way...so I dunno. I'm excited about doing more Gabriel/Elle with you though. I've missed them a lot, like I didn't even realize it until we started talking about it more.

[electrocutesy]

Our interpretations of them are kind of consistently epic, let's be honest. All of our Gabriel/Elle logs have been especially shiny gems, in my honest opinion.

And yeah, that makes sense. Like, I know I'm good at Sarah and I love her, but I don't really... empathize with her as much as I do Elle. I know I'm better at Elle, and not just because of experience. But yeah... I mean I guess you can argue that although they are the same person they are so different in so many ways.

[justgabriel]

I definitely think our Gabriel/Elle stuff has been our best. Hands down.

They really are really different, from my experience of playing them. They have a lot of the same traits, as they are basically the same person, but how they manifest and react to those traits are different.

[autophoenix]

Okay, let me start by saying that I am really envious of how well you play Elle. It makes me flail because I could never, EVER play her vulnerable side as well as you do. You also really pull out the fact that she never really got to be a kid well, and that's part of what I love most about her CR with Ruby is that they got to share that moment with the Barbie dream home

[blueshocks]

Yeah. I've realized her snarkiness has kind of...flailed again. I think I need to do some serious canon review. It's been a while since I've done so and I think I've been pretty down myself lately, which has made it harder for me I think with a lot of characters who should feel snarky, and I shouldn't let that effect my characterization. So I'll definitely continue to work on that. I don't know why it's been such a problem for me lately. But I also just...feel like some of the stuff that's happened with her in

To be honest? I feel like they're static and I've been doing voice reviews for them. I did it recently for Bela in preparation for the big logs planned, and I've done it a little with Sandra. Gretchen is next on the list as I've honestly...not watched any of season 4 since it aired. So thank you for bringing this up, as it's reminded me that it's something I do need to work on.

I'M SO EXCITED TO HAVE HER THERE FINALLY TOO. I CANNOT WAIT FOR PLOT STUFF.

[regeneracy]

I'm going to try and give constructive crit here, and I've been sitting here trying to think of things. I really love Elle a lot, and I wish she had more of a presence. She still tags a lot, but she doesn't have the same presence that she used to? Which probably has a lot to do with rl stuff for you, so I think it's just something that will pass in time. I know I'm going through the same thing right now.

Also, I miss Sandra being a bigger presence in the girls' lives. That's not really a crit as much as...me just wanting more Sandra.