Concrit Post 3

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Only doing my active RPs

[bouncy_erbear]

daisychainrpg
Riza Hawkeye::Full Metal Alchemst (manga)::hawkeye_shooter
Giselle::Enchanted::gorgeousgiselle
Toph Bei-Fong::Avatar::rocktothetoph
Abarai Renji::Bleach (manga)::dreadthered
Negi Springfield::Negima (manga)::welshonionmage
Thomas Raith::The Dresden Files::sexandahaircut

paixaorpg
Ichihara Yuuko::xxxHolic::mistress_yuuko
Virgil Hawkins/Static::Static Shock::notabattery

[loopmein]

To be honest, I don't know the canon of your characters much, with the exception of Riza and Giselle, so most of my attention goes to them.

I like Giselle. When I first saw that her when I just joined the roleplay, I was a bit reluctant because it seemed very strange for a character like her to be thrown into a situation like that. But then, the same thing goes for a lot of the characters that are played at Daisychain, so I was rather quick to accept it. Her relationship with Wolf was so unexpected yet so fitting and so cute that I have to say... I ship it. Which is something I hardly ever do.

Riza is also pretty sweet, although I don't follow her logs and threads very much. I do think that she needs to expand and interact with more characters considering how long she's been there (in other words, I'd love to see more of her hanging around).

Unfortunately I only played with Negi once. I was tempted to play with him again in one of the open logs with Grumpy McGrumperson... but for some reason just never got around to it. Someday,

[bouncy_erbear]

To be honest I can't even remember what possessed me to bring Giselle here...but she's lasted as a muse so I'm pretty happy XD

Yeah, Riza's not the most social of my muses but I'll definitely try to get her out more. ^^ Thanks for the crit.

Oh and you should totally play with Negi more, he's been bad about meeting other ppl too so I'm going to try to get him out more as well.

[precto]

Curious question. Needs srs answer. How would you feel about a Nagi?

[bouncy_erbear]

*A* Naaaagiiiii

That'd be pretty sweet.

[precto]

No halting reservations about having an irresponsible dad around?

[bouncy_erbear]

|D Considering we're supposed to be getting an Evangeline as well I think you might be the one that needs to worry.

\o/ But Nagi is awesome.

[precto]

Nagi says he doesn't date old hags but

YES, I WILL LOOK INTO IT