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Concrit Post 6

May 21, 2009 07:56

How's My Driving?

∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

► play nice! flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for rp-anonmeme/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not ( Read more... )

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God, please don't eat me, I'm a first-timer... loveinviolence May 21 2009, 13:21:39 UTC

...seriously? O_o ...*sharpens knives* kilraaj May 21 2009, 13:26:02 UTC

Y-yes... never done hmd meme outside the ooc before... loveinviolence May 21 2009, 13:35:00 UTC

kilraaj May 21 2009, 13:36:35 UTC

More seriously, the reason I am so extraordinarily unhelpful is because the only ones I know are Minato and Loz and I think you're doing just fine with them. Minato's been in Discedo a long time and it's both toughened him and worn on him, and Loz is just...Loz. I'm a little curious to see if he'll mature a bit, being in Discedo, but at the same time I love how you show his childishness and I don't want him to ever lose that. XD

loveinviolence May 21 2009, 16:58:51 UTC

Oh hush. :| At least you gave me some DETAILS. heh heh.

I'm really glad that so far people seem to like Loz. I hope I can keep it up- he's not hard to play, he's a lot of fun and it's interesting to see just what he'll do next, since most of the time I don't even know. It's hard to predict the next move of somebody who doesn't think. :P

As for Minato, he's certainly a pain in the butt to play, the way that I do it. Tapping into the social chameleon in him and getting into people's heads can be a challenge, but it's also fun. But the thing that gets to me hardcore is the police work. Man, that gets to me OOC a lot of times. @_@ I really appreciate hearing that you like how he's been developing. Same goes for Loz- I hope I don't disappoint.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! usagi_no_hime May 21 2009, 16:47:29 UTC

You are the Kahihara Masa-mun and the Bridget and Loz-mun?

Oh my god! You are also Shimbo and Sumomo?!

...whoa. I never knew that.

loveinviolence May 21 2009, 16:55:22 UTC

Yup yup! That's me! lol, it's always weird when I find out there are still people that don't know that. XD

*RICHARD IS EVERYONE EVER* fjdskfkladsfkl

Re: God, please don't eat me, I'm a first-timer... loveinviolence May 22 2009, 06:31:01 UTC

CLAMP-fan anon here. I checked out your Shimbo. His voice is down pretty good. Few people RP him and I like your portrayal in general. I'm going to get nit-picky though. Something about his type of journals strike me as off. A lot of them are [reaction post to some shocking thing] here, where I'd want to see personal development of his character. Or at least variety. Something that says more [this is about me] than [oh god this place]. He also doesn't seem too active which is a shame.

loveinviolence May 22 2009, 07:02:19 UTC

Thank you for your compliment. I would like to see more people play Shimbo, or find people who are playing him now if possible so I can see what others are like. It's a shame more people don't play him, he's a great character.

Yeah, I definitely have had an activity problem with Shimbo, and I put him on a semi-hiatus until I could figure out how to do him justice.

I fell into those types of posts when I started feeling like I was losing his voice and the only motivation there was was to react to other things. I wanted to make a post with him tomorrow or whenever this recent event is over to try and get him out of that whole reaction-post thing, however, so I'll definitely keep this crit in mind. He won't be talking about the Clow Card event at all, as I opted all my characters out of it, so I'll do my best to kick off fresh.

I really appreciate your honesty, thank you very much. I didn't get any comments on this recent HMD, it's good to hear people's advice.

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