Comments | hmd_me: Concrit Post 17

hmd_me

Concrit Post 17

Jun 19, 2010 07:03

How's My Driving?
∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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justforthegun June 18 2010, 22:05:29 UTC

adachy June 18 2010, 22:06:40 UTC

dont rp anymore

justforthegun June 18 2010, 22:08:09 UTC

stop bullying children

justforthegun June 18 2010, 22:08:24 UTC

you know how much i

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signifies June 18 2010, 22:05:52 UTC

draping June 18 2010, 22:11:30 UTC

So far everything I've seen of Schneizel is amazing. His voice is very solid and his reactions to everyone was right on the money. I think you're doing a great job and I'm so glad you apped aaaaahhh. Looking forward to seeing more, definitely!

whitemaneuver June 18 2010, 23:45:16 UTC

Ohmygod thank you djkasf You have no idea how scared I was when I intro'ed it at amat I think I scared away half my plurk list because I couldn't stop screaming...... keysmashing..... yeah. d,ksaj thank you so much also I know I owe you tags I'm so sorry I'm so slow /sob ♥

stakeh June 18 2010, 22:16:07 UTC

I have no idea how you handle all of these characters and still give them the proper attention they deserve, BUT, YOU DO. And it's just incredible. ♥

I ADORE YOUR ITACHI, JUST SAYING. He's the reason I wanted to play Sasuke in the first place! I also love your Cross and I want to bug Freuling again soon.

(HASSLE)

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kanapima June 18 2010, 22:05:54 UTC

discedo
Noble Heart Horse - Care Bears: cousin_founder
Marx - Kirby: maruku_soul
Slowking - Pokemon: icouldusepants(also pokedressing)
The Shredder - Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles: is_an_utrom

mayfield_rpg
Professor Oak - Pokemon: theoakmiester(also pokedressing)
Wart - Super Mario: veggiephobe
Rosalina - Super Mario: starbits_addict
Ribbon - Kirby: iheartcrystals

kanapima June 18 2010, 22:52:09 UTC

I know this isn't crit, but your Slowking is brilliant. Your Oak is also fun to stalk on occasion. I have absolutely no complaints about any of your characters I'm familiar with.

invisibill June 19 2010, 00:09:16 UTC

I have no crit, for I adore all your characters and love sending my two talk to them. Okay, so they haven't actually talked to Marx or Shredder yet.

But I really like the way both Noble Heart and Slowking are developing in Discedo as they face some of the nastier parts of the game.

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pretending June 18 2010, 22:06:01 UTC

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ROLO LAMPEROUGE 〔ＣＯＤＥ　ＧＥＡＳＳ　Ｒ２〕 ➠ anon enabled hmd■ Still working on the crit from last time! Please forgive me for being a bit slow with it, sob. I didn't want to do a total 180 or anything with Rolo's personality/actions/etc, so I'm trying to work stuff in gradually.
MINATSUKI TAKAMI 〔ＤＥＡＤＭＡＮ　ＷＯＮＤＥＲＬＡＮＤ〕 ➠ anon enabled hmd■ I always worry about this one, orz
GAAP 〔ＵＭＩＮＥＫＯ〕 ➠ anon enabled hmd■ Anything at all will be a big help!

pretending June 18 2010, 23:20:53 UTC

I love your Rolo so much. I hope someday you bring him back to Discedo.

pretending June 18 2010, 23:21:26 UTC

O-Oh///// Thank you, anon. If I feel the time is right, I might.

pretending June 18 2010, 23:32:28 UTC

i feel that you have greatly missed the point of minatsuki's entire character. she is openly sexual with very little restraint in amat. there is a lot of canon evidence in her personality, background, and development from past chapter 10 that directly contradicts this.

before i extend upon crit for you, can i ask you to explain why you play minatsuki in such a ridiculously oversexualized manner? canon itself does not even sexualize her as much as you do, and not at all in the same way. you seem to be missing the point that minatsuki uses the concept of sex as a tool for manipulation. instead, you have her focused entirely on 'getting off', which is far from the truth of her character as both text and subtext state and imply.

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jazzingitup June 18 2010, 22:06:10 UTC