Concrit Post 17
How's My Driving?
∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!
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∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!
▶ Play nice! Flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for anonmemearchive/roleplaysecrets▶ IP addresses are not ( Read more... )
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Maka Albarn → soulreads; (Soul Eater)
Youmu Konpaku → samyonrai; (Touhou Project)
★ damned
Yukari Takeba → remedying; (Persona 3)
★ campfuckudie
Remilia Scarlet → monthlyfate; (Touhou Project)
Have at it with anything at all. o/
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Jack Harkness || wantsadoctor || Doctor Who/ Torchwood
Edward Cullen || eyesoftopaz || Twilight saga (to be apped soon, but previously played at entranceway)
[@luceti:]
Blair Waldorf || queen_b_forever || Gossip Girl
The Doctor (10) || im_brilliant || Doctor Who
Jet || rebeloutcast || Avatar: the Last Airbender
[@polychromatic:]
The Doctor (10) || im_just_clever || Doctor Who
I'm aware I'm on Hiatus/Slowatus everywhere at the moment due to personal reasons, but I'm still curious!
[Homeless:]
banana_bamf
thethumpthump
iluvmygarden
pinky_of_evil
non_stoppable
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magical_logic - Miles Edgeworth - [Ace Attorney]
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I'm not as familiar with his canon as I should be, so that might be totally 100% IC (and fff, I like things as they are ♥), but I keep finding myself totally shocked that he's even giving Snow the time of day.
Like I said, though: I hope it is totally IC, because it's amazing to not get blown off by an Edgeworth for once.
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OK for starters oh man all of Edgeworth's best friends are complete losers. To a man, more loyalty than smarts--even Phoenix, who is a pretty smart guy, is just inhumanely loyal. Which makes sense really because Edgeworth is kind of a really shitty friend and any reasonable person would tell him where he could stick it after the first time he decides to cut off pretty much all contact and spend a year in Europe.Er drifting point there sorry. What I'm getting at is that Edgeworth hangs out with his fair share of morons, and Snow has demonstrated, at worst, a Gumshoe-level of idiocy, and it's not really until around Larry-level that Edgeworth starts getting "GO AWAY ( ... )
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I didn't really think you were being OOC, I just didn't understand the mental processes that would allow it to be IC. Now I do. :Db
So uh. Keep on rockin'~!
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Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney): perfectrecord (Also has an anon-enabled, IP-logging-disabled HMD entry at the top of his journal)
Homeless/fountainofcod/dear_mun/etc.:
Mike Meekins (Ace Attorney): dork_at_duty
The Judge (Ace Attorney): judgey_udgey
Lucca (Chrono Trigger); guns_n_glasses
Nabooru (The Legend of Zelda); sage_of_spirit
Tasslehoff Burrfoot (Dragonlance): not_a_cutpurse
And anyone else not mentioned that you know of is fair game. You can also leave crit for them here at my all-purpose concrit post, also anon-enabled and IP-logging-disabled.
As always, I welcome crit on anything, both anon and logged-in. I'm especially interested in ICness and writing, and especially whether I've improved on the tl;dr issue that was pointed out in some of his prose tags. (I've been working on cutting that down; how's that been working out so far ( ... )
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Albert Wesker | Resident Evil | visestvita
Tohru Adachi | Persona 4 | det_goofball
Excalibur | Soul Eater | pantlesstroll
Apollo Justice | Ace Attorney | hornyattorney
Matt Engarde | Ace Attorney | totally_dude
I KNOW I'VE BEEN ON HIATUS but I am posting anyway shut up.
Also:
Kaname Chidori | Full Metal Panic! | fan_hand
She's only been in the fourth wall but I wouldn't mind feedback if anyone has any!
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also, karaoke?
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and enough hardons to keep a whole convent busy
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