Concrit Post 18

[hmd_me]

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[atoli]

★ i_s_l_a_n_d_rp
Maka Albarn → soulreads; (Soul Eater)
Youmu Konpaku → samyonrai; (Touhou Project)

★ somarium
Maka Albarn → resonancy; (Soul Eater)

★ campfuckudie
Remilia Scarlet → monthlyfate; (Touhou Project)

Hit me with whatever you have in mind. o/

[wiederholt]

i love your maka

let's do cool stuff together some time

[atoli]

uwah thank you ♥

YES i hope to get into many hijinks with the witches

[muse_lightning]

The Regulars crimsonguarddog | salkia_island
ivorygunslinger | luceti
argentallure | sirenspull
revengebound | sirenspull
fearmongering | rubycity_rp

Others scarsofloyalty | FF7 Compilations
minearebigger | FF7 Compilations
hewasansem | Kingdom Hearts Days
soldierofluck | Vision of Escaflowne

Or they can all be critted over Here!

[chrysophilist]

I've only threaded with Rufus @ rubycity_rp once, and for just a few comments, but I enjoyed it. You play him very well, and as unlikely as it may be, I'd like to get more CR with him and Rikku.

[fearmongering]

I'm sure there will be more opportunities for them to speak! Rufus is settling down pretty quickly and he'll be on the network and he's always looking forward to finding more lackies talking to people.

[chrysophilist]

I'll throw her on his posts, then!

[gonsai]

I'm pretty sure it's up to date

Most characters have individual crit posts as well.

[gonsai]

I realize that several things in the fandom as a whole can be subject to interpretation, but oh man that Parsee. Definitely interesting to see how you portray her, keep it up.

[shiros_ashes]

I NEARLY SHAT MYSELF READING THIS! I was so relieved by the end of the statement.

Thank you, anon. I do my best with her, I really do. is it bad that I base her partially on my own hangups with self-loathing and jealousy?

[gonsai]

It does say a couple things that this anon already knows, but hey, if it works, it works?

[pana]

A Facility「　ｎ　ａ　ｒ　ｕ　ｔ　ｏ　」　MADARA UCHIHA　➝　forefather
Siren's Pull「　ｎ　ａ　ｒ　ｕ　ｔ　ｏ　」　SHIKAMARU NARA　➝　underachieves

[table_chan]

I haven't been able to stalk your Madara for a while and since I never really got to do this before...but I just wanted to share that he is hands down the best Madara I've seen.

You aren't afraid to play the bad guy, which...for some people is hard to do for what ever reason. I just remember back to a plot from A Facility that was all over because Madara was kicking ass, taking names, and just being the villain he's meant to be :') I love watching you play him.

I'm only sorry I didn't give you and Madara the treatment you both deserved in AT :( <333

UHHH So. Yes. *sounds like a silly stalker fangirl now :|a* I tried sliding to A facility to see if there was a way to watch him again, but I think the comm got locked or something. I'm sure all the things I said have gotten even more awesome since I last saw him jklfds. /just going to slide back to my corner now

[pana]

Ahh thank you! Playing the villain is a lot of fun for me. Although I'm about to take a pretty different direction with him, now that he's reached the pinnacle of villainy as far as Facility goes.

Well, I guess it'll be similar to how I was handling him at AT. It's too bad AT didn't work out, but everything there was just too slow for me.

I don't think Facility is locked?? These are my tags: posts comments logs

[catchingspirit]

You know I love Madara stirring things up. I have to admire you for playing such a big figure from such a long-running and still-running series and doing it well; you manage to find feasible ways to adjust him if new canon information comes along, and yet really you always seem to know him enough to be on-target anyway as new chapters come out.

[kitty_nakoji]

Just the one now, still at damned

Venom | Guilty Gear | anemptydecapo

I'm feeling a little shaky, but hopefully still doing okay.