Concrit Post 18

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[fitperfectly]

amatomnes.
The Eighth Doctor | fitperfectly | Doctor Who
Okay, for Amat I'd prefer comments on characterisation and writing only because it had been forever since I'd read the novels and I know I've canon failed a bit at times with regards to canon point, as I've been more comfortable with audio drama!Eight. BASICALLY, I AM AWARE, AND I'M WORKING ON FIXING THAT AS MUCH AS I CAN and I've been re-reading the novels lately. So. gdmkh SORRY AND I AM TRYING; I'd prefer to be told about things I haven't picked up on. Thank you!

gargleblasted.
The Eighth Doctor | misremembers | Doctor Who

homeless.
Simm!Master | andvainglorious | Doctor Who
POSSIBLY PROBABLY GOING TO DAMNED. still. sob.

Shaz Granger | notatory | Ashes to Ashes

[sanestlunatic]

Hi, I'm just going to drive-by flail at the fact that someone plays Shaz. *flail*

[fitperfectly]

'Attempted' would probably be the better word |D

[superskelton]

Could reattempt? :D?

(Megan told me to speak to you, so blame her for this comment.)

[hotsquats]

@ AMATOMNES
ZUKO • avatar: the last airbender • hotsquats
COUNT D • pet shop of horrors • dvour
FRANZ D'EPINAY • gankutsuou: the count of monte cristo • depinay

i'm still brand new to d and franz, so hopefully i'm doing okay! i'd love to improve any of them, though, so let me know! ♥

[andsarcasm]

I'm still waiting to see D be as fabulous as he can be, but that may have happened in the Yumichika log. idk I forgot to check back on it LMFAO /bad person

But! BUT BUT BUT I absolutely love how you're handling Franz. I can see him doing everything you have him doing in all of your tags back to me, and I love it. Boy needs more wallpaper clothing, but seriously, I think you're doing really fantastic so far.

Also. Zuko. idk if I even really need to say this but alskdjfa;e I only picked this guy up because of you and Jet, I love how you play them so much. He's such a derf, and I can hear him coming through in the tags.

IN OTHER WORDS NEVER STOP BEING DELICIOUS MY LOVE

wow that's weird coming from this journal to yours

[hotsquats]

YEAH i've been really nervous with d especially because it's so hard playing him without his powers. i'm definitely waiting until after the event to throw him into stuff more, so hopefully. RIDE ME HARD, PLEASE.

franz...fjkhkjh i'm really glad to hear you say that, because i've been so INSANELY nervous about him. i'll get him into some crazy wallpaper shirts once i figure out how to icon that gd series =____= thank you so much, and please be rough with me where franz is concerned. i've had the most trouble with his voice so i'm the most happy to hear you say that.

as for the avatar stuff... i'm just so lucky right now. i feel like i have the best cast in the world. i'm so happy you apped. ♥

now never speak to me that way again, sokka.

[adaptivity]

Totally random, but I adore Zuko's journal name. :')

[lythdan]

@ discedo

Manfred von Karma - fingersnapping | Ace Attorney
Adrian Andrews - notmanaging | Ace Attorney

@ sirenspull

Franziska von Karma - whip_the_fools | Ace Attorney

I swear I'm planning on bring some non Ace Attorney characters into games next month! In the meantime, if you have any feedback on other characters of mine you've seen around, feel free to comment on them too.

[pullsheavendown]

I'm digging Fran so far. She's still settling in, so I expect we'll see more of an impact from her once she can really get her claws into everything, but I'm pretty sure they'll be good things based on her so far.

[lythdan]

Thank you! I'm glad that you've been enjoying so far. To be honest, I'm simultaneously nervous and really excited to get to play one of my lawyers in a panfandom setting where they get to do something even remotely related to their home professions, aha. Yeah, I'll be looking to get her more involved and hopefully keep her around for a good while. I'm really enjoying the game so far. ♥

[mereprototype]

amatomnes:
rideonmyharley Kia WelBehenna // Absolute Obedience
nagasakivampire Kazutaka Muraki // Yami no Matsuei
wirehanging Yohji Kudou // Weiss Kreuz

sirenspull
tots_prodigy Nagi Naoe // Weiss Kreuz

mayfield_rpg
notyoureditor Nic Reynolds // Original Character
playsdoctor Kazutaka Muraki // Yami no Matsuei
bittermayfly Nagi Naoe // Weiss Kreuz

All but Nic should have crit posts in their journals as well.

[agnosiating]

Really enjoyed what I saw of Muraki. He had this fine line between classy and crazy that made him stand out to me. And him turning into Suigintou was so eerily fitting, it was great.

[nagasakivampire]

Thank you.

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