Concrit Post 5

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Comments

[marrow]

wirebones (lloyd asplund) ► toujourshotel, cgdressingroom

[bbackup]

your lloyd tastes good

[marrow]

GET OUT

[bbackup]

doesn't he like me

[indict]

I'm on RP hiatus, but whatev.

dramadramaduck:
Sunao Fujimori/Ran - sunao_punch

kakistocrati:
Hisoka Kurosaki - unfeelingempath

Homeless (but occasionally played in random places):
Hanyuu - mybffrika
Tokito Minoru - notakittenkthnx

[kemosabe]

I haven't seen your Hanyuu yet..

But Sunao/Ran and Hisoka are the most epic Sunao/Ran and Hisoka. Ever.

[indict]

asdgjh that icon

\o/ Thank you, daughter~~ ♥

And you must play with my Hanyuu someday. I fail with her. But still.

[kemosabe]

This is my favorite icon now. If you stare closely you will notice there is no nose. It came off the face in a bowl of pot pie.

You're welcome mommy~!

And you must play with my wangMion someday.

[khadaj]

Only putting Squall on here because he's the one I really have trouble with/worry about.

discedo

Squall Leonhart lionwilled

absolute-hold

Squall Leonhart knightsvow

entranceway

Squall Leonhart lionsoath

[carnality]

Fuck you this will turn into another love meme response because I respect how you characterize your characters so much

[xo_gunner]

WHY DID YOU DO THIS now I have to go talk about all the things you're doing right but I didn't want to spam your thread with epic paragraphs of love and get yelled at for not concritting.

NOW GO WATCH RED EYE and my app for Tony got approved so do your fucking Castle app so Tony and Castle can be idkbff.

[thedawniscoming]

I'm always really impressed with Lisa. Honestly she seems like a difficult character to not only play but branch out well with and you do. She reacts so well to Jackson and I always really appreciate that~ The fact you can keep her interacting with him without going ooc is truly awesome.

I love your 13, and Constantine lmao. I want to bug him more with his idkbff Gabriel :D And Dick god damnit. I wish he could be in DDD just because his and Harvey's interactions/backstory would be way too much fun to play with :| When we do gothamcomm we are setting up some storyline with them. You have no say.

You're still doing great with Bruce. I know it's been hard (as it has with Harvey) to deal with the angst but you've done a good job without making it stifling. I still say he and Harvey need to actually see each other :< or maybe batman, though that would be like '-lol shooting you now-' WHATEVER. you know. busy killing mobsters B

[evangelic]

discedo
Mona Lisa (TMNT) / onceahuman
Aigis (Persona 3: FES) / foundheranswer
Rise Kujikawa (Persona 4) / jazzhandsgo

amatomnes
Morrigan Aensland (Darkstalkers) / aensland_love
Bad Girl (No More Heroes) / averybadgirl
Akira Hatsushiba (Gacha Gacha) / sneeze_switch

capeandcowl
Mona Lisa (TMNT) / notacostume