Fic: A Perfect Circle - "Ash Nazg" Challenge

Oct 30, 2006 10:58

Name: danachan
Title: A Perfect Circle
Challenge: Hobbit Smut "Ash Nazg" Challenge
Word Count: 5,847
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Frodo/Merry, Merry/Pippin
Warnings: Slash, sexual content, rape, other dark themes
Summary: But you loved him first, you loved him best. You still do.
Notes: I signed up for this challenge right away and gladly picked Merry, ( Read more... )

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claudia603 October 30 2006, 16:20:13 UTC
oh my goodness so dismal and so wrong. Poor the three of them! And that last paragraph was just so chilling. I think the ones about any of the hobbits taking the Ring just disturb me more than anything...evil!hobbits are just...just...eep!

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danachan November 1 2006, 00:05:09 UTC
I'm glad you read this and I am sorry it was just so well terrible (in that dismal and wrong way, of course). *hugs and hugs* This really was a difficult story to write! But I'm glad it's out there because now I won't have to worry about it festering anymore.

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danachan November 1 2006, 00:05:59 UTC
Oh, darling. *hugs* I'm so sorry but, well, thank you for reading it. I know it's not your thing, so knowing you have... well, that does mean a lot. (Thank you for linking to it as well. I never thank you for that, the way I ought to.)

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abby_normal October 31 2006, 04:24:13 UTC
Well, so I have done it to your Pippin and you have done it to my Merry. Which didn't make this any easier to take, believe me. I think you know my thoughts on why this would make sense and oh, it hurts. Hurts, I tell you. Which means it hit its mark and go you and all that. I still want to smack you, though.

Thank you for playing, Dana!

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danachan November 1 2006, 00:08:49 UTC
You know, when I first saw how we would get to pick a character, I thought of taking Pippin but then I didn't think I'd know where to go with that - maybe because Pippin is closer to my heart and it possibly would have hurt me too much. (I did a lame fic once but it was very lame.) I couldn't bear writing this, but I'm glad it's out - when I first sat down to write, it wasn't supposed to happen this way. I'm not even making excuses.

But no smacking! Please! I'll be good! No more fic like this for well maybe a short time. *wicked little grin*

Thank you very much for reading this, dear. I am sorry for having done what I had to do (to Merry), but I really was just writing out the story the way it wanted to happen.

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ilthit November 1 2006, 21:44:35 UTC
I still say you write the best Ring-fics. The subtle wrongness it imprints on the bearer is so much creepier and more effective than any whispery voices that distinguish themselves from the characters' thoughts. It's just like the book when it does it best. <3 Plus sex. Which is good.

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danachan November 2 2006, 22:55:28 UTC
You say such nice things (I keep saying that, but it's true) and I appreciate them all. *kiss* Thank you, love.

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mariole November 2 2006, 04:52:43 UTC
Wow, I really like this! The mood is so tangible, like a fog around one's brain, dimming and confusing. You chose such an interesting time period, too-- before the power of the Ring is truly known, but it exerts its evil influence. Really lovely fic!

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danachan November 2 2006, 22:56:39 UTC
I consider myself contrary and I never do things the way I should, but thankfully my style is suited to this sort of thing. I keep saying this but I mean it, and I am very glad you read this! Thank you. ♥

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