The Proper-False (Part five, PG-13, 1500 words)

[lilian_cho]

Title: The Proper-False
Author: lilian_cho
Rating: PG-13 for mild swearing
Fandom: Original
Pairing: Adrien/Nicholas
Wordcount: 1500
Warnings: Nicholas still doesn't care for Michael Jackson. As always, there's Chinese jokes.
A/N: Answers holidaysmut's aviation, awkward moments and cuddle challenges and writing_game's afraid promptUnbeta-ed as of yet, please do point out jarring

Comments

[saki101]

Many sweet touches (the fragrance of the t-shirt, the flavour of the toothpaste, the softness of the pillowcase) and the effective distraction technique at the end of the chapter is charming.

Thank you for remembering to tell me when a new section was done. I'm looking forward to the next part already. (The trip to the family tailor sounds like it will be fun. I had a tailor scene with Anton and Illya in an earlier section of the story I was trying to finish for picowrimo. There is something about visiting a tailor together that is very appealling.)

[lilian_cho]

Hurrah, thank you =D Glad you noticed all of those, I like the distraction part too =)

Yw, part six is finally up!

I love reading tailor visits but I've never actually wrote any, so hopefully I'll be able to do it justice. This makes me wish I'd tagged along/paid attention when my older brothers have their suits made ^^;;

[mechante_fille]

^_^ I guess they'll cuddle more when they are both ready for it. They are getting along famously, though, so far. I love how matter of fact Adrien is about the sleeping arrangement's. And how cool Nicholas thinks he is being about it, while freaking out inside. I so wonder how well he is really hiding the freakout.

[lilian_cho]

Adrien is a sneaking sneak that sneaks =D

Some people can fake it so hard they start buying into their own fake press pretend image. We'll see which category Nicholas falls into ;-)

Glad you like, thanks for commenting =D
Part six is finally up.

[jayanx]

Thanks for letting me know about the new chapter, I keep forgetting to tell you how much I appreciate that.

Love the bit about the kitten fur, it's nice to see how Nicholas is using his sense of humor to try to cover up how nervous he really is, and to keep just a bit of distance between them.

The sleep snuggling was cute, and it's nice to see how comfortable Adrien is with physical contact (at least when he's half asleep) makes me think that they might actually pull this little charade off.

[lilian_cho]

Yw, I'm replying to every comment anyway, might as well notify people of new installments =) Two birds, one stone, etc.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for your kind comment! That kitten fur bit came out of nowhere, I couldn't not include it X-D

Part six is finally up.

Also, Yomiko Readman = <3

@u@ Notice of posted new chapter works

[charisstoma]

"freshly skinned kitten pelt" Icon say "WTF!" *slaps Nicholas with a paw* Don't mind me, I'm in the middle of writing 'feline familiar' fictions. "WTF!"

Adrien is afraid of flying? But he was born with money. *nods head* Too many Final Destination movies.

I do hope that Adrien is not going to save their 'first time not sleeping in bed' for staying at the parents. Tell me that they get a hotel room or coming back from the tailor with new minted clothing will look odd.
Adrien is moving this slowly. Loved his off-hand way of getting Nicholas into bed and OH he cuddles *sighs* and at least the toothbrushes kissed. *grins*
Poor Nicholas being 'I'm okay/nervous' about the those little details that speak of potential intimacy with Adrien.

They had better practice kissing in there somewhere too. Toothbrushes can't have all the fun.

I did notice that Nicholas fell asleep very quickly or Adrien took a very long time in the shower *grins grins grins* before cuddling up to Nicholas for the night.

Re: @u@ Notice of posted new chapter works

[lilian_cho]

*g* *g* *g*

(I'm surprised nobody has done anything with kitten/cat fur yet. Too narrow to bother, possibly?)

Which one is the first fic of your feline series?

Ahaha, phobia has nothing to do with money. Or possibly he had a trauma during childhood regarding airplanes which he himself did not remember.

Answering the rest of your comment later; just wanted to note that part six hopefully will be up by this weekend. (I have a presentation tomorrow and an exam on Friday, so.)

Re: @u@ Notice of posted new chapter works

[lilian_cho]

Tell me that they get a hotel room

I can't promise anything! X-D Although they are moving at a slow pace, aren't they? Heh.

Ahaha, the toothbrush kiss actually happened irl. It was red toothbrush/blue toothbrush, and they're the exact same model. Inanimate brothercest w00t. Real life is so eminently slashable.

I did notice that Nicholas fell asleep very quickly or Adrien took a very long time in the shower *grins grins grins*

It might possibly be both ;-) Nicholas does tend to sleep at the drop of a hat. Lucky guy.

Part six is up, with more toothbrushing (I didn't intentionally set out to write it, okay!) and sleeping.

Also, I can't remember where you're at, but I hope you're doing okay!