The Proper-False (Part six, PG-13, 1584 words)

[lilian_cho]

Title: The Proper-False
Author: lilian_cho
Rating: PG-13 for kissing and mild swearing.
Fandom: Original
Pairing: Adrien/Nicholas
Wordcount: 1584
Warnings: Adrien found James McAvoy's voice sexy; what else is new? I swear I'll stop writing scenes where Nicholas brush his teeth. Probably. Next time, it'll be Adrien's turn to brush his teeth!
Bonus: Toddler

Comments

[jayanx]

Sweet, it's nice to see Arian warming up, love the interaction between the two of them at the end. The bit about the therapy couch is one of my favorites. It's nice to see Nicholas so willing to give of himself in the name of science.

Yomiko Readman is pretty awesome.

[mechante_fille]

Hee-hee! Kissing happened! And more is pretty much promised! Oh, they are pretty cute, getting to know each other. A little backwards, maybe... usually people get to know each other first. Details.

I can just imagine Nicholas was difficult to potty train! And his aunt has hit on a pretty smart tactic... still rather awkward for Nicholas.

I don't know what a pickery comm is.

long reply is long

[lilian_cho]

britpickery and hp_britglish are comm.s where Americans non-British people writing in a British setting can post their questions. hp_britglish is supposed to be exclusively for Harry Potter fanfic writing purposes, but I've (sekkritly) used it for other fandom purposes too.

I mean, things like, how hot & how dry is a New York summer, what the heck does the JFK airport look like, do people get carded regularly in restaurants, etc. would be nice to know =(
As it is, I'm hounding the few East Coast LJ friends I have with questions, haha.

A little backwards, maybe... usually people get to know each other first. Details.

It won't be a Harlequin romance if it's not a little backward *g*

Thanks for reading and commenting (and on the bonuses too)! Glad you enjoyed =D
I'm trying to imagine how my older brothers would've reacted if our mom had pulled something like that. Then again, I do have an aunt who regularly supplied her son's bedside drawers... (She has three boys) ._.

Re: long reply is long

[mechante_fille]

Hm, it has been a little quiet of late, but I would say you could throw some of those questions at those of us on noduque and see what you get. Maybe not quite the same as the pickery comm.

I like that you research stuff and really try to get it right. That always pleases me in fic. It shows a lot of respect for the reader and the story. ^_^

[lilian_cho]

Also, curses on LJ for changing whatever and making it impossibly frustrating for me to edit posts on my phone =(
(Cursor jumping everywhere when editing). It's still annoying on my laptop, but nowhere as impossible.

[charisstoma]

Perfect placement of kiss. *grins* Believably used with awe factor for mind candy. Important.. they did their first kiss, it was good, appointment for future kissing practice in future and da*n Nicholas is doing an impression of Pretty Woman if he starts charging for horizontal therapy. Love the humor involved. Just for the sake of medical science. *snickers*

Movie was Smurfs? *head desk* I've participated in snitch the alcoholic drink sips action. That's the way to do it. *nods head*

Adrien is where on the birth order with his sib?