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Rhythm of Love (The Winn Remix)

Sep 26, 2010 01:01

Title: Rhythm of Love (The Winn Remix)
Author: hopenight
Pairing: Winn (Will/Finn), minor Will/Terri, mentions of other characters
Rating: PG-13
Warning: language, AU, teen!Will
Word Count: 4,775
Prompt: (for winnners bi-weekly prompt) Finn Hudson has been in love with his best friend, Will Schuester, for as long as he can remember. He just can't bring himself to ( Read more... )

pairing: will/finn, fandom: glee, character: will schuester, character: finn hudson

Comments 24

madmenfanatic September 26 2010, 06:19:11 UTC

When Terri entered the pitcure and Finn backed off, you had me worried. I'm glad that once they finally admitted they liked each other, how very easy it was to become a couple.

hopenight September 26 2010, 06:20:13 UTC

I live to make people nervous. ;) Besides they were already a couple they just didn't know it yet.

allan_93 September 26 2010, 23:26:00 UTC

Aww, this was really cute, and the ending kinda made me squee a bit :)

hopenight September 27 2010, 00:00:16 UTC

:) I'm glad you thought so! I had a little too much fun with the backstory.

Thanks for reading!!

pfenix_goddess September 26 2010, 23:48:59 UTC

That was lovely, and wonderful, and it gave me the fuzzies!

hopenight September 27 2010, 00:01:16 UTC

It was meant to be all three of those things!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

Thanks for reading!

tawg September 27 2010, 02:41:11 UTC

I think the complete entirety of this was adorable. I loved Puck telling Finn that he was in love with Will, especially the "You and me? We're best friends. You two are boyfriends". It was an oddly possessive Puck that I love. And Matt and Mike were awesome too, and the idea of Kurt and Artie holding an intervention made me laugh. It was really great to see that they both had friends and different social circles, but were still friends.

I really loved Terri, too. How you wrote her is pretty much how I see her in high school too - little remarks and put downs, trying to shape Will, possibly isolate him a little. And the idea of Sue being scared of Terri made me laugh. It's quite possible.

Yay! Awesome present is awesome!

hopenight September 27 2010, 02:51:46 UTC

It was meant to a fluffy fic. Because everyone loves fluff on their birthdays!

Haha I was worried about Puck. I'm never sure if I write him right or not. So it's always an inevitable freak out when I know I have to slide him into a story (this also goes for Kurt since I'm too laid back to fierce). Hahaha I love Artie besides everyone knows he watches Doctor Who so the Torchwood comparisons would totally pop up.

Oh Terri. Is it obvious that I didn't like her? It was nothing personal really. She was just one of those characters that got under my skin. But I saw her the same way. The amount of self doubt Will had in canon meant that this had been going on for a good amount of time. I can totally see Sue being a little...put off by Terri (she would never admit that she was scared).

*hug* Happy birthday lovely!!! :) I hope you liked your e-card!

tawg September 27 2010, 02:57:18 UTC

The card was great! (I do indeed love the Beatles.)

hopenight September 27 2010, 03:53:46 UTC

Yay!!! :)

naruto_minamino September 27 2010, 03:52:31 UTC

I loved this so much. Especially your usage of Shrek quotes. That and the fact that EVERYONE knew about them before they did. Puck's conversation with Finn was my favorite.

hopenight September 27 2010, 03:57:08 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it so much!

I have to say that it was fun tossing in those Shrek quotes. I love Shrek. Finn and Will seem like the type of guys who enjoyed it too. Because they're awesome like that.

Hahaha I LOVE obvious relationships that everyone notices except the two IN the non-relationship.

It was fun writing Puck's conversation with Finn, but I was terrified that I wouldn't get his characterization right.