[Fanfic] Stumbleine

Dec 21, 2010 10:09

Title: Stumbleine (the written version)
Characters/Pairings: Alfred (US) /(UK) Arthur
Rating: PG13 (just to be safe for angst)
Warnings: Human names used, big angst and sadness
Summary: A Christmas gift to my dear big brother hakuku. Based on her superb doujin Stumbleine (you should read it!).
"Alfred attempts to play a game with time in order gain back what ( Read more... )

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sillyjasdero December 21 2010, 18:21:04 UTC
oh my... I couldn't... gah! I read aria_dc_al_fine's 'epilogue' fic and...and...YOU WROTE ANOTHER ONE!!!
*cries hysterically*

this is wonderful~

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hoshiko2 December 21 2010, 18:41:50 UTC
Haha, I actually proposed the idea to Haku back when she put up the third installment, but wanted to wait until the final chapter came out. Took me a little while to write it, though, but I put off reading aria_dc_al_fine's epilogue because I was worried I might incorporate something of hers. But now I'll read it! :3

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thisiskanta December 21 2010, 18:49:48 UTC
*takes a deep breath* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH ( ... )

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hoshiko2 December 21 2010, 21:38:45 UTC
Oh Kanta. I can always count on you to give me some of the best comments ever. I love you so much. Haha!

I rarely see clingy Al, actually. I think Liete's Al is the closest I've seen to a clingy Al and that's not even close to how bad I've seen Arthur get. I think a clingy Al/America is quite sweet since Arthur has historical reasons to get upset. America...not sure much.

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kasumicc December 21 2010, 18:54:44 UTC
Even by knowing how the doujin goes, this made me cry once again ^^' It's heartbreaking like that. The extra epilogue was a nice addition! I just hope things turn out alright for them, and that giving Arthur the watch won't bring further problems ;w;

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hoshiko2 December 21 2010, 21:43:06 UTC
Haha, thanks for your always awesome reviews! :3
*Hands tissue.*

I think things will be great for them now. And if it does bring problems, Alfred has faced worse. I know he can handle it.

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thisiskanta December 21 2010, 19:04:33 UTC
;_; sdgbafarhga

Must be hard to lose the love of your life. -clings-

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hoshiko2 December 21 2010, 21:42:10 UTC
Ah...yeah it was. A lot of the emotions Alfred had were/are emotions I felt when he was killed.

But like I said, I'm getting better. :3

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aria_dc_al_fine December 21 2010, 20:11:38 UTC
Hi :) Your written rendition of the doujin fills 'in-between' the panels of the doujins. Alfred's thoughts lend so much more emotions to the piece.

It's uncanny how we both could imagine similar circumstances happening in the epilogue - about Alfred being clingy and possessive/worried about Arthur all the time. They're like complements, what's with mine being in Arthur's POV and yours in Alfred's :D. If I were to write Alfred's POV, I would have written comparisons of his Arthur at this Arthur, too. It just shows how great Haku is, to induce similar reactions from us! ;D

Ah, about the watch, I have my own theory that since in this altered timeline, Alfred couldn't have bought the watch for Arthur when they were 22, the watch does not exist in this altered timeline. But this is your piece, you're free to do whatever you want with it :)

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hoshiko2 December 21 2010, 21:41:05 UTC
Haha, I'm actually about to read yours. I didn't wanna read yours first and then go, "MINE WILL BE SHIT BECAUSE THIS IS AMAZING" or somehow put the same thing in. Looks like happened anyways, lol.

Oh, that's an interesting take on the watch. I hadn't thought it that way. Haha, always fun to see other people's ideas. :3

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