[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 10/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England with the band and two new members!
Rating: R
Warnings: Language and sex
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites can attract with the help

Comments

[chiisana00]

All I can say is.... Ouch! Dry! Is this their first time?

My suggestion would be that you come back later to fix up the smut part? xD;

[hoshiko2]

Haha, no this is their first time. And honestly, the type of person (and country) America/Alfred is, I just don't see him automatically knowing these things. England/Arthur would. Hur hur.

[chiisana00]

Being America the nation, I think he's pretty much shown around already by his people, lol.

And as Alfred, I expect most of the guys would already had looked at porn. Then, I do know a guy at my age who doesn't look at them at all, which surprised me.

In anycase, I still say you come back later to fix up the smut xD It's definitely not your first time writing smut anyway! -Huff huff-

[hoshiko2]

Haha! Yeah, America would know it, but he would claim not to and probably get all nervous cuz he's still quite the youngin. *Loves on.* :333

Alfred is an oblivious boy. He looks at porn, not gay porn. Heh heh.

A-ah, yeah... *Blushes.* I think I'll just keep it the same. The next time they have sex it'll get better, don't worry. Arthur will show Alfred how it's done. ;3b

[iggyxalfie]

THANK YOU SO MUCH HOSHI THIS MADE MY HORRIBLE DAY SO MUCH BETTER ;w;

so sweet and the sex SO AKWARD and poor mattew and -glares at bad friends trio-

hey hoshi 8D do you have facebook?

[hoshiko2]

Yay for making your day better! :3 I enjoy knowing I can deliver it with awkward sex and bad touch trio. Lol
I sure do! I'll pm ya it. :3

[iggyxalfie]

WAAAAAI!
well, I do not quite like the bad touch trio but it was more like -haters leave Arthur alone-

[hoshiko2]

Oh trust me, they don't hate Arthur. ;3

[thisiskanta]

dammit. I'm never first to read this anymore. I took forever because I was watching Dr. Who. T3T (well trying to; I still don't get it... *marathons*) Anywhooo

[hoshiko2]

Lol! Gotta be quick girl! But don't feel bad as you're drawn into the wonderfulness that is Dr. Who. >3333

While I'm not wild about Prussia/England (AND I HATE FRUK), I do have a bit of a guilt pleasure at seeing Spain/England, especially they beat the shit out of each other. >33333

I had a friend who's dad did that very same thing. When I met the guy I made a loud comment going, "MAN! I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR BIRTHDAY ON [Insert date here]! IT'S GONNA BE AWESOME!" That guy was like, ".... *Is not amused.*"

They didn't use one this time because they got caught up, but Arthur will put a stop to that ASAP their next time. And thank you for that, sweetie. I'm not one to focus on the actual sex itself. It's still too awkward for me (I'll leave that for other amazing writers to do), so I like to see the emotional and loving side of it.

[hetalia17]

HNNNG AWKWARD FIRST TIME SEX~! XD

But the emotional part of it was beautiful. Made me grin like an idiot while reading it. <3<3<3

Also...Doctor Who. <3<3<3!!!!!

Re:

[hoshiko2]

*High fives!!!*

[kasumicc]

OUCH XD That must have hurt! Fortunately it got better for Arthur, so it ended being a little more as he imagined it to be ;3;

Also, I can imagine the BFT will give quite the hard time to Arthur xD
And, did I miss something or...how is that Arthur's parents didn't come home? o.o

[hoshiko2]

You didn't miss anything. They came home, but didn't check on them. 'Course what this means for the morning... >3