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hottielibrarian

Because I Wanted To

Feb 26, 2009 19:54

Leaning against the bar and sipping her Jack and Coke, Callie scoped out the crowd at Joe's for her favorite tall blonde. Callie had texted Erica earlier, instructing Erica to come to Joe's after her shift. Erica texted back she had a late surgery and would meet Callie afterwards. To kill time during her insipid wait, Callie distracted herself ( Read more... )

callica fic

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whitelder February 28 2009, 07:30:14 UTC

YES!

hottielibrarian February 28 2009, 23:38:33 UTC

Thanks for reading!

cruez2788 February 28 2009, 08:07:35 UTC

OOOOO Are we getting an account of this backseat lovin? Cuz seriously this was really good

hottielibrarian February 28 2009, 23:39:26 UTC

Yeah, I'm working on the backseat makeout session.
Thanks for reading!!

lizadizzle February 28 2009, 08:10:13 UTC

ZOMG YES! so so so much THIS. >.> we can haz moar? *pouts* plz?

hottielibrarian February 28 2009, 23:40:30 UTC

I'm working the sequel in the backseat! Thanks for reading!!!

momof4withtwins February 28 2009, 09:02:14 UTC

this was great. liked that they were very flirty to one another and the making out in the backseat HOT!

hottielibrarian February 28 2009, 23:41:37 UTC

Thanks! The writers missed out on any flirting b/c they're complete morons, so I thought I'd try it. Thanks for reading and commenting!!

vinjii February 28 2009, 10:30:31 UTC

It started with Callie trying not to wave like a lunatic, loved that part, I could relate to that so much. It's like, squeeeee, wave, dork, but then you remember, you want to look cool.

Erica was now an expert at calculating the perfect vantage point that provided the most opulent view of Callie's breasts, whatever the situation.

Mwah, I know about that! Wonderful sentence, also the next about being a loyal fan of Callie's ass, again, wonderful.

And then, Callie where's your car? Outside.

NO? REALLY? I always park my car right at the bar. You're weird Callie. Really.

I love this, I love your stories, they're simply brilliant, please keep on writing. Also, I want to see that make-out session.

hottielibrarian February 28 2009, 23:43:27 UTC

Wow, thanks for all the detailed feedback--that helps so much!
I'm working on the make-out session right now--I'm a little nervous writing it, but I'll see what happens.
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to write such awesome feedback!