Because I Wanted To

[hottielibrarian]

Leaning against the bar and sipping her Jack and Coke, Callie scoped out the crowd at Joe's for her favorite tall blonde.  Callie had texted Erica earlier, instructing Erica to come to Joe's after her shift.  Erica texted back she had a late surgery and would meet Callie afterwards.  To kill time during her insipid wait, Callie distracted herself

Comments

[prattle01]

lol! Loved this. The big question of "where to go?". Part 2 ? :)

[hottielibrarian]

I'm working on part 2 right now!! Thanks for reading!

[reddirtgirl]

I just did a ridiculously excited *squeee* to this, very publicly lol...

Ahh I love it :D

[thecon12]

I love that you're fixing what the writers so badly messed up :) You're versions of these little scenes are filled with so much more depth and development that you can really see how their attraction and friendship is growing.

I thought Callie was adorable with her holding back waving and flirting whenever she got the chance; loved seeing her make Erica flusters with her teasing questions too.

Erica was again wonderful, was great to see her vulnerable side pop out and have her be bashful with Callie's flirting and yet still able to take a few risks with things like the "want to see you naked" comments.

Loved that Callie just felt this overwhelming need to kiss Erica, that she was willing to drag her anywhere they could be alone, and the backseat of her car? That's just priceless.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us :) I really hope you'll continue this one, so we can see them acting like loon teenagers making out in Cal's car lol.

[hottielibrarian]

Wow, thanks so much for the detailed feedback--it means a lot!

I'm still shaking my head over the catastrophe the writers created. WTF were they thinking?

Vulnerable Erica is my favorite. I think the badass stuff is just a front, and I like the idea of her only being her real self with Callie.

And I'm working on that backseat making-out stuff. I'm a little nervous if I can pull it off, but I'll try it.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to give such awesome, kind feedback.

And PS--I love your work and I eagerly await your next fic!!

[mickaela82]

I was JUST thinking of this scene these days wishing that when Erica said she hated Mark for having seen Callie naked, Callie would have answered “I’m all yours now.” And here I was wishing somebody would fix that scene and…here you go! WOOHOO!!!

Erica only heard that Callie wanted her.

That’s pretty much what I’ve ‘heard”, too. As much as you can hear by reading. LOL.

Uhm…gals? You’re not just best friends anymore. Get over it!

"You don't have to get me drunk to take advantage of me," Erica confidently reassured her in her lowest, smuttiest tone, beating Callie at her own dirty game.

That’s my Erica. You go, girl!

Poor Mark. Like it’s his fault that Callie couldn’t hold her freaked out self together.

Loving their alcohol-induced confessions. Aww. Just when I thought I couldn’t love those 2 more…

I’d have loved to see THE Erica Hahn and Callie sneaking out and making out in the car. The imagery floating through my head is hilarious!

[hottielibrarian]

Awesome! Thank you so much for all the sweet, detailed feedback!

I think alcohol lessens people's inhibitions and I wanted to see what they would say to each other, how their true feelings would come tumbling out.

I'm working on a sequel to this, the backseat part. If it doesn't suck, I'll post it soon.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting--it means so much!!

[hot_4_hahn]

You did an amazing job reworking that scene. The sexual tension and their playful banter was just wonderful.

It was very enjoyable to read them confess their first attraction, and why Erica initially kissed Callie. I love how they're like a couple of horny teenagers, so adorable.

Thank you, this was magnificently written.

[hottielibrarian]

Cool! Thanks so much! The writers somehow missed out on all the sexual tension. Morons...

I always wondered why Erica initially kissed Callie in the elevator, so I tried to figure it out. And I thought alcohol would prompt confessions from both of them.

Thanks for reading and giving such thoughtful feedback--it means so much!