Because I Wanted To

Feb 26, 2009 19:54

Leaning against the bar and sipping her Jack and Coke, Callie scoped out the crowd at Joe's for her favorite tall blonde.  Callie had texted Erica earlier, instructing Erica to come to Joe's after her shift.  Erica texted back she had a late surgery and would meet Callie afterwards.  To kill time during her insipid wait, Callie distracted herself ( Read more... )

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hottielibrarian March 1 2009, 00:02:15 UTC
OH MY GOD!
Interpol is my favorite band of all time!! You have no idea. And of course i know "The New"!! It's one of my favorite Interpol songs and I never thought about it, but you're totally right. It's perfect for Callica!!
So, no that's totally not an overshare! I'm thrilled someone else even knows Interpol, let alone knows "The New."
Thanks so much for writing and the sweet feedback!!

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hottielibrarian March 1 2009, 04:38:13 UTC
I know, no one knows them! I'm always introducing people to their music and I make my best friend come with me to their concerts.
I heard TOTBL in someone's car when it came out and I instantly fell in love with them.
When you think about it, a lot of their songs could apply to Callica:
No I in Threesome
Public Pervert
C'Mere

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loved it nybullmastiff February 28 2009, 14:57:36 UTC
I have been waiting for someone to rework that scene it was one of my favorites!!

I loved how they each open small parts of themselves slowly and build the tension.

It is great! Cannot wait to read more.

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Re: loved it hottielibrarian March 1 2009, 00:03:44 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! I loved that scene and I just wanted to explore it further.
Thanks for reading and leaving such kind feedback!
And I love the picture of that cute dog!

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caddieluver89 February 28 2009, 15:04:06 UTC
ooooh much better scene definitely :D

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hottielibrarian March 1 2009, 00:04:40 UTC
Cool! Yeah, I had to rework that scene and explore what I wish had happened. Thanks for reading!

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rollingbug February 28 2009, 16:06:27 UTC
"hiding under a blanket?" Awesome!! Loved it :D

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hottielibrarian March 1 2009, 00:05:12 UTC
Thanks for reading and the sweet feedback!

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wallsurrender February 28 2009, 16:32:55 UTC
Awesome...completely amazing. Loved Callie throwing an internal pity party when Erica doesn't get there right away and then the intense staring match that occurs when she does.

I found Erica's internal thought of wanting to always be at an advantage point to see Callie's breasts to be so fabulous.

Thoroughly enjoyed the girls each sharing secrets and slowly pealing back the armor that they've hidden their hearts behind when it has come to their relationship.

Loved the thought of Callie and Erica sneaking out to Callie's car and making out under a blanket...the need you created for each of them to have to 'make out' was fantastic.

Fabulous as always. Thanks for sharing.

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hottielibrarian March 1 2009, 00:08:49 UTC
OMG! Thank you so much! I can see Callie almost throwing a tantrum until Erica arrives. I wanted them both to be too cool to show how excited they were to finally see each other.
And I'd totally be sneaking looks at Callie's cleavage, so I imagined Erica would as well.
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and leave such detailed feedback--it means so much!

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