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hottielibrarian

The True Kind

Apr 03, 2009 10:11

Callie laid on top of Erica, completely spent and struggling to catch her breathe, her ear over Erica's heart, listening to the reverberating throb of the heart she recently laid claim to. The women savored their afterglow, cocooned in their comfy bed, the shadowed room lit only by remote stars and the distant moon's dim rays slanting through the ( Read more... )

callica fic

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hottielibrarian April 19 2009, 18:31:38 UTC

Well, Erica had to learn more about this pass into her pants business, right? I'm working on their wedding in my head...hopefully I'll have something soon. Thanks so much for reading and commenting--it means a lot!

wolfie259 April 19 2009, 04:53:50 UTC

Aww. It reminds me of how my grandpa called my grandma his bride till the day he died.

hottielibrarian April 19 2009, 18:32:34 UTC

Cute! I've always loved that, when someone still uses "bride." There's something so lovely about that. Thanks for reading!

chepis April 19 2009, 05:41:32 UTC

This was great, i like how natural their dialogue is. I love that it was callie that propose. And i laugh when i read:
Erica secretly wanted to knock Callie up as soon as possible. They had a lot of babies to make.

She's defenitly think ahead. But who wouldn't want little callies running around, lol.

hottielibrarian April 19 2009, 18:34:24 UTC

I would love a bunch of little Callies running around, as would Erica. I like that Callie proposed too. I like her being the more aggressive woman in the couple, I guess in reaction to her trepidation on the show. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback--I appreciate it!!

one_escape April 19 2009, 06:04:58 UTC

Erica laughed riotously. She only truly laughed with Callie.

This made me smile. And I love how well you write their banter.

hottielibrarian April 19 2009, 18:36:45 UTC

Thanks-I'm all about the banter. Thanks for noticing that detail too. I laugh the hardest with my best friend, so I imagined it would be true for them too. Thanks so much for reading--it means a lot to me!

mickaela82 April 19 2009, 07:44:53 UTC

Callie broke the kiss only to soak in the sight of her naked and freshly-fucked fiance beneath her.

Well now, that’s the most intriguing use of “fucked”, as an epithet. LOL!

She had her yes but a part of her couldn't quite believe she deserved the angelic, unclothed girl in her arms.

Well, generally you DON’T, but in THIS story…Callie, you most certainly DO! Way to go, girl!

When I put a wedding ring on your hand, that's an all access pass into your pants. Forever. I own you. You're mine and I get to do whatever I want to you. However. Whenever. And as much as I want. That's what marriage is. All sex. All the time. Why do you think people get married?"

HOT! But what about when Erica’s wearing a dress? *giggles*

Great one! And I really appreciated the imaginative use of words. I like your style. Now ya gotta do the wedding, too!

hottielibrarian April 19 2009, 18:41:04 UTC

Cool! I didn't know if that use of "freshly-fucked" was too much, but it seemed hot to me. Plus I guess Callie was admiring the effect she had on Erica, what she could do to her, you know?
And Callie does deserve Erica, I just think she'd be overwhelmed and in disbelief at how lucky she was to have Erica forever.
Yeah, I think the pass works for dresses and skirts too. :)
Right, I'm working on the wedding in my head...I know it has to be spectacular.
Thanks so much for reading and leaving such thoughtful feedback--I really appreciate it!