The True Kind

[hottielibrarian]

Callie laid on top of Erica, completely spent and struggling to catch her breathe, her ear over Erica's heart, listening to the reverberating throb of the heart she recently laid claim to.  The women savored their afterglow, cocooned in their comfy bed, the shadowed room lit only by remote stars and the distant moon's dim rays slanting through the

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How Great Was That? Super Great :-)

[punky_96]

Bravo! I agree with Callie, my favorite kind of Erica is “a fucked-Erica”. Gosh that sounds so harsh and so very hot. Hmmm. And I loved that Erica teared up with the re-proposal. What a great little game for the two of them to play. “her vision blurred, pixilating Callie into a ravishing blob above her” You just write them so sweet, but not too much. They are great. Now, this cracked me up-“wrestling Callie's paws off her breasts”-Callie would SO paw at Erica unable to control herself. Hee hee. And of course I’d put a ring on Erica too to have that “all access pass into your pants.” I love that they are sweet, but still very sexual. Sometimes it’s one or the other. I tend to not have a lot of sweet, so you’ve done a fine job with the balance. And I’m beginning to love these kind of references to Callica-“This was love. The true kind.” You get me everytime. Erica’s tears described like that was beyond wonderful-“Erica's heart leaked when it was happy.” The end? What a great way for them to celebrate and bring in a

Re: How Great Was That? Super Great :-)

[hottielibrarian]

I know my favorite kind of Erica would be a "fucked-Erica" so I assumed Callie would feel the same. It did seem kinda harsh, but I just went with it.
I kinda liked Erica tearing up. I like her being the more emotional one, the more sensitive one.
I'm relieved to hear I didn't overdo the sweetness. I was craving some Callica-sugary-sweetness.
I'd paw and maul Erica all the time. I like imagining that Callie couldn't keep her hands off Erica.
I don't know what you're talking about--you do have sweetness in your work! There's an inherent love and affection in all your work. Your work is also insanely hot. You have mad smut skills. I'm still unsure about my smut skills.
I'm a sucker for true love and all that crap. I need to imagine that they have that.
Thanks for such detailed feedback--you know I'm always waiting to hear what you think and how much your opinion means to me.

Re: How Great Was That? Super Great :-)

[punky_96]

"I love that they are sweet, but still very sexual." There's your answer on your smut skillz. I went back through it and loved it just as much. And I said in my first run through sweet and sexy.

Did you intend it as a continuance of Bright Star? I read it that way, but then forgot to ask since I was blown away by the rest of it. I could see them in the same universe. Actually now I want to go back and see how all of your stories fit together. I think that you've been unwittingly drawing us into a larger arc. That's pretty cool. I could see the laundry scene and the moving boxes scene and then Bright Star and this one together in a line. I love it when I finally put pieces together in my head. Good luck with the wedding! I have such a hard time when I try to approach that. I can't wait to see what you'll do for the girls next.

[thecon12]

This was absolutely beautiful <3

I'm so inlove with them being so inlove lol. You write them so well, I adore watching them go from sexy, to loving, to their cheeky banter, it's so perfectly them.

A fucked-Erica was Callie's favorite kind of Erica. - I think that's mine too, Callie has a great mind ;)

I love all of the little details you include throughout the piece, it brings it alive in a way that really touches the emotions.

Wonderful piece, thank you so much for sharing it <3

[hottielibrarian]

Thanks! I need them to be so in love, you know? I think that's what they could have been, if given the chance. And I love the cheeky banter. Yeah, a fucked-Erica might be the best Erica ever. Thanks for noticing the details. You do that expertly in your writing--I've always appreciated that in your work.
Thanks so much for reading!!

[reddirtgirl]

Oh wow, this is all kinds of wonderful. I love that they are so in love in your stories <3 (huge Yay for fluff! lol)

There are just way too many lines I could quote in this piece that blew me away, and made me love this couple even more (if possible).

It was absolutely gorgeous &hearts

(I second the vote for a wedding or honeymoon maybe <3)

[hottielibrarian]

I know--Yay for fluff! We all need more Callica fluff in our lives, right? I'm so happy I could make you love Callica even more, if that's possible. I'm going to try to work on a wedding, it's kind of a scary idea because I know it has to be amazing. Thanks so much for reading the leaving such sweet feedback and I am so lusting over that icon!! I love that image of her!! SO hot...

[hahnsrockstar]

That's some damn good sexy fluff right there.

[hottielibrarian]

oh good!! I needed some sexy fluff, I'm all about the fluff!! Awesome icon by the way--one of my favorite scenes!! Thanks for reading!

[mirandyscrow]

That was so sweet and soooo Awesome!! I wonder how ppl will react to Hahn walking around with that ring? Thanks for the post!!

[hottielibrarian]

I never thought of that!! Maybe I'll write something about everyone's reaction at work! Thanks for the brilliant idea! Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback--I so appreciate it!