The True Kind

Apr 03, 2009 10:11

Callie laid on top of Erica, completely spent and struggling to catch her breathe, her ear over Erica's heart, listening to the reverberating throb of the heart she recently laid claim to.  The women savored their afterglow, cocooned in their comfy bed, the shadowed room lit only by remote stars and the distant moon's dim rays slanting through the ( Read more... )

callica fic

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sapphicwarrior April 19 2009, 16:07:51 UTC
this was awesome again! Loved it :D. You write them super well!
Hope you'll write about their wedding day :)

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hottielibrarian April 21 2009, 18:43:14 UTC
Gosh, I'm trying to dream up the wedding but it's such a daunting task because I want it to be perfect, you know? You should write their wedding! You'd do a better job than me. Thanks so much for reading and taking time to comment--I'm always curious to hear what you think!

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hottielibrarian April 21 2009, 18:44:07 UTC
Wow, you're so sweet! I think this is what love is about, or at least what I hope love's about. Thanks so much for reading!

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asc11 April 19 2009, 17:56:48 UTC
that was both sexy and sweet! i love their banter & their little games they play with each other. it's adorable... but hot as well. you do a great job writing them! i love your work!

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hottielibrarian April 21 2009, 18:46:11 UTC
Cool, thank you! I like the mix of sexy and sweet. I'm relieved to hear their banter works. I sometimes worry that it's too corny. I'm a little cheesy, so I worry that it might get too annoying somtimes. So thanks so much for reading and taking time to comment--I so appreciate hearing what you thought! Thanks!

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hottielibrarian April 21 2009, 18:49:23 UTC
Wow, thanks! Yeah, fluffy, sexy Callica is the best! And absolutely how it should have been on the show. I think they were deeply in love, or could have been if they were given a chance on the show. I really like Callie being the more aggressive one too, I guess in contradiction to the bullshit panic stuff on the show. She was normally so strong, so why wouldn't she go after what she wants, which is Erica. Thanks for pointing out the "a fucked-erica" line. I didn't know if that was too harsh, but I couldn't get rid of it and it seemed like a Callie thing to think.
Thanks so much for reading and leaving such detailed feedback--I appreciate it so much, you have no idea!

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fast_chicken April 20 2009, 06:51:30 UTC
Wow, how could I miss this for so long?
That was so awesome and cute! Like all your stories. I love your writing. I can't wait to read more :-)

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hottielibrarian April 21 2009, 18:49:57 UTC
Awesome! Well, I'm glad you found these fics. Thanks so much for reading them!

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