NEW ED DB fic *squee*

[housecam4life]

Here's my first ever Emily/David fic. sorry if the spelling and grammar is off as I don't have a beta yet, anyone willing to help let me know though. please let me know what you think <33
Enjoy (=

Title: His
Dedicated to: All my lj friends. ILU!

Comments

[odakota_rose]

EEEEEEEEEEEEK!

*loved it*

*dances around*

Are you seriously sure that was your first Emily/David fic?
It was great =)
You feel your face heat up in embarrassment and you hope she didn’t catch you staring at her but you know she did. And your glad.

This was cute..

The only thing I noticed was a few minor spelling errors and in one spot it kinda switched from second person to third and then back, other than that it was perfect.

*waves hand*
I can beta if you want! *grin*

[housecam4life]

hehe I'd be glad for you to help =))

[odakota_rose]

Yay ^^
If you want, you can email me.. odakotarose@yahoo.com =)

[odakota_rose]

Hey

[kinseyjo]

i friended you. and i'm so glad there's more crazy ppl like me in the world who think these two crazy kids are totally gettin' it on off-camera. :) lurve their chemistry as emmy and dave even more than brennan and booth. seriously. anywho, you're awesome! want to be friends? :)

[housecam4life]

any emmy/dave fan is a friend of mine :D I shall friend you back :P They are so totally "gettin' it on" off-camera hehe, and look out for some more ed/db fics i'm gonna post soon :D

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