Just Another Day Chapter 4

[phen82]

Ok This is the first time I've done this, so I hope it turns out alright. Here's the 4th Chapter for Just Another Day. Sorry it took so long, but I only found out that I was to write this chapter late last week. It's my first try so go easy on me... Enjoy!

Comments

[magdelena1969]

That was SUPER!!!! You handled the Ghost of Christmas present so well, and Lily is the EXACT spirit I pictured for Christmas Future!! Oh I can't wait to see where we go from here!!

You're a really good writer. Glad to have you as a part of the group!

:) Maggie

Excellent

[goldpemcorgi]

Fantastic Chapter! you did exactly what I would have done if I was the one who volunteered for this chapter. Well done and kudos for your maiden voyage with us!

Corgi

[jennuine]

Welcome to the insanity! Great to have you aboard!

This was brill. :D

[aliciamasters]

This was spectacular! You really developed this so well... hopefully, Severus will realize soon how he is affecting everyone around him.

Lily! Brilliant!

The Telephone?

[ex_leianora730]

I loved this chapter, but maybe you should change it to flooing, since the Weasleys are a pure blooded wizarding family and probably wouldn't know how to use a phone. Arthur didn't even know how to say it, after all. It's just a suggestion.

Other than that, it was really really well-written, and emotionally intense! Loved it! :-)