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Fic: The Smallest Shift (PG-13)

Aug 21, 2009 19:10

Title: The Smallest Shift
Author: emmacmf
Rating: PG-13 for language
Challenge: (Both of them as Aurors) A dangerous mission leads to a very close miss for one of the boys. The other is so relieved they're both safe he kisses his mate without thinking about it.
Summary: When Ron acts on instinct, he thinks he's ruined the most important thing in his life ( Read more... )

2009, emmacmf, pg-13

Comments 24

shocolate August 21 2009, 18:32:33 UTC

*has tagasm*

Harry's trainee, however, is a complete knob.

[ahh, a British!Ron…]

I pushed material aside, and when I saw the shiny pink intestine poking out of the slash across his stomach, I retched, but managed not to vomit.

[ah, people who work in hospitals scare me…]

We've had too much bloody practise at this - we know exactly what to say to our best mate when he wakes up in hospital.

[big sigh]

'Sorry,' he murmurs. 'But you're alright.' He pulls his hand out from underneath Hermione's fingers, and rests it on top of mine, at his shoulder. 'You're all right,' he repeats,

[which is all he cares about…]

By it, I mean kiss him ( ... )

emmacmf August 21 2009, 18:39:01 UTC

I was totally thinking of you when I wrote about Hermione and her little sticky tab things!

Thank you for holding my hand through writing this!

shocolate August 21 2009, 18:42:33 UTC

ah, you're totally a Harry/Ron writer, now... fly my little one, fly!!!

emmacmf August 21 2009, 18:43:42 UTC

You're completely to blame!

massielita August 22 2009, 02:43:28 UTC

this was so cute! i really enjoyed reading it. well done :)

emmacmf August 22 2009, 09:39:34 UTC

Thank you!

vanseedee August 22 2009, 10:56:04 UTC

Oh that was adorable and charming and so very real. Loved it!

(I'd like to know what happened to the trainee Auror knob)

emmacmf August 22 2009, 11:03:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

What happened to the trainee Auror knob will probably be in the sequel I'm planning on writing for harryronbigbang.

vanseedee August 22 2009, 11:07:50 UTC

Ooooh, excellent. I can't wait to read that.

asnowyowl August 22 2009, 16:31:52 UTC

I adored this! I loved how, once it happened, they both realized (eventually) that it really was just meant to be. Very, very nice!

emmacmf August 22 2009, 19:29:56 UTC

Thank you very much!

hpuckle August 22 2009, 18:04:00 UTC

Gorgeous! ♥ Perfect boys.

xxx

emmacmf August 22 2009, 19:30:13 UTC

Thanks, chicken! x