new fic: Ode

[hth_the_first]

Ode
by Hth
Rodney/Ronon
a sequelette to Satisfaction

Summary: Naked poetry. Yes, naked poetry. What, I can't have an id, too? It could totally happen, okay?

Special thanks to linabean for beta duties, as well as for the mere existence of this version of the characters. (I told you I'd post it if I ever found the wherewithal to add in the sex!) Also,

Comments

[apple_pi]

...I'm sure I'd have had something coherent and thoughtful (and praiseful!) to say about the poetry and the way Ronon and Rodney are, here, together. But then you undid me with the lust and tenderness and joy and now all I got is: nnnnnggghhhh.

On the up side, I have a lot of it:

Nnnnnnnnggggggghhhhhhhh.

That was gorgeous.

[hth_the_first]

Thank you! I think that about covers it nicely. *g*

[misskatieleigh]

oh I love this. I'm not always a big fan of Ronon/Rodney, but this seemed to capture some essence of what they could be together, a glimpse at what makes Ronon tick that we don't often get to see on the show. ♥

[hth_the_first]

Thanks! I think that's the fun of fic, really: all the stuff you don't get to see on Friday nights. *g*

[inkscribe]

He’d say anything to get this and have it and keep it all to himself, Ronon’s hands and his smile and his trust and everything that went along with.

This is absolutely beautiful, and a fabulous last line. I love Ronon reading poetry, too! :-)

Thank you.

[hth_the_first]

Thanks! Credit to Caroline for that -- that was the final line in an earlier draft she read, but it wasn't supposed to be the end entirely. She's the one who said, don't be dumb, that *is* your last line. I'm actually very pleased on both our behalves that you agree!

[mrshamill]

Oh my God. Ronon reading poetry has to be the hottest thing ever.

I adore this pairing, but I've got to tell you, I adore it more when you write it. You capture their essence, the same togetherness I saw in Carson's bedroom while Rodney was packing up his friend's life and Ronon came to make sure he was all right. Rodney drives him crazy at times, but I really believe Ronon likes him, really believe it could be love.

Pardon me while I melt into a puddle of goo.

[hth_the_first]

Thank you! I do think they're a good pairing, at least partially because Ronon is such a good caretaker, and Rodney needs a lot more care than he gets, I think. I really believe that Rodney would be so much better and happier as a person if there were someone in his life who would spend time just being with him. And I like the idea of it being Ronon because they are so different, and I think the things they'd find to talk about really would be new to each other -- if that makes sense.

Anyway, I'm glad you found it sexy and romantic! There was no other point to this story than that, really. *g*

[twistedchick]

::fanning myself a lot::