Comments | hummingfly67: Stargate SG1 Fanfic: Fubar

hummingfly67

Stargate SG1 Fanfic: Fubar

Mar 04, 2010 18:24

Title: Fubar
Author: hummingfly67
Prompt: Sometimes I think to myself, this is it, this is going to be the day we have a nice, sane, boring mission ( Read more... )

fanfic, stargate sg1

Comments 21

campylobacter March 5 2010, 01:38:31 UTC

\o/ Yay!

There can never be enough Action!Vala and Whumped!Cam, with Shocked!Daniel, Awed!Sam, and Impressed!Teal'c looking on.

And as the official beta reader for this piece, I'd like to reiterate that the switch from Daniel's to Vala's PoV is subtly and deftly handled with the symbolic transition from passive sentence structure to active. :-D

Are you planning to post this to daniel_vala? Cuz I'd like to post a rec to this story for the empty 5 March slot, unless you wanna.

hummingfly67 March 5 2010, 13:16:29 UTC

: )

Thanks! And thanks again for the beta!

Would this qualify for d/v? My d/v tinted glasses see d/v, but not sure if others would!

campylobacter March 6 2010, 05:30:57 UTC

It's definitely a Vala character piece! Might qualify for a prompt at Gate Women.

oceania March 10 2010, 00:37:10 UTC

Yes, it's a D/V piece. When he says "I see you" after she has said earlier, "People see what they want to see", it's a turning point. He is telling her that he knows who she really is now. The scales have fallen from his eyes. I like it because it removes the "PATERNAL!Daniel" that he shows whenever he says "I'm proud of you" that still makes me want to bitch slap him. And I love him. But seriously, hate him when he's condescending. This story evens the power in the relationship and thus paves the way for hot sex. Nice work!

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normaltrouble March 9 2010, 05:35:30 UTC

Very good, and I like the Vala or Aeryn? moodthemes.

I like that you did make quite clear that you go through a gate into the uneffenknown really. And the chaos that the Go'uald left and the Ori also must result in dozens of fubar scenarios.

Sighs.
Wishes for a season 11, just because.

hummingfly67 March 10 2010, 12:45:30 UTC

Thanks very much! (aeryn moodtheme)

Oh, Season 11...wonder if it would have had D/V. *sigh*

caramel_monkey March 10 2010, 08:19:06 UTC

This is pretty damn epic. I like it!

hummingfly67 March 10 2010, 12:47:18 UTC

Thanks for commenting, glad you liked!

majorsamfan March 11 2010, 01:22:51 UTC

Lots of fun!

hummingfly67 March 11 2010, 12:24:38 UTC

: ) Thanks!

aelfgyfu_mead March 13 2010, 00:59:57 UTC

Very nice Vala piece: I like to see her using her skills-and taking a little well-deserved pride in them. I also like the contrast between Daniel and Vala's points of view, though as Vala comes to realize, there may be less disparity there than she expects.

hummingfly67 March 13 2010, 13:59:25 UTC

Thanks very much!

I like to see her using her skills

Me too! The show only touched on her skills lightly, or in jest, after Prometheus Unbound, imho.