Picking on Heartstrings

May 13, 2013 21:14

Hi. It's been a while. :)

This one's actually my first time, writing in present tense. Never again. orz

Again, dedicating this to Tipco, Kaia, Pistol, Wolfie and Baby vy. <3

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There she is. )

taeny, taeyeon, fanfiction, tiffany, two-shot, snsd

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anonymous May 13 2013, 16:38:03 UTC
Re-read the fic n try to give a new comment, hopefully this comment is not too boring ><"

Similar to my previous comment, the best part of this fic is when u describe how Taeyeon and Tiffany look.
The starting paragraph on how Taeng looked makes my imagination run wild, Taeng dressing up as average girl-next-door is simply too adorable~
I like the amount of dedication Fany put into this relationship, she din't even manage to ask for Taeng's name before asking her out, and even after realizing how silly she must've been, she waited patiently, anxiously under the freezing snow all because of that shimmer of hope, which paid off <3
I like that drama u put in which reversed the roles of who's trying to court the other~
I kind off feel bad for Taeyeon because from what i see she really have no clue she upset Fany just being enjoying the attention.
Also i'm glad how she is willing to put aside her guitar =) i think that showed how much she cares n i thought its relly sweet ^___^

I'm over commenting now ><" i believe my comment on SSF was ( ... )

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humyourheart May 20 2013, 14:06:45 UTC
There's never such a thing as over commenting :) Thank you, I appreciate that you're re-commenting for this ;A;

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anonymous May 15 2013, 02:25:02 UTC
hey, thanks for this wonderful story!

i like how you put twist in the story, like suddenly theres a girl flirted with taeyeon!
thus from that taeyeon and tiffany would not progress this fast rite!
hehehe thanks a lot :)

i hope to see you again in the next story!

.daash.

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humyourheart May 20 2013, 14:08:01 UTC
I needed a turning point, glad that turned out well. xD Thanks :)

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Awesome Taeny One-shot, My Friend ! yeo_64 May 15 2013, 22:41:08 UTC
Bravo, my dear friend for this Beautifully written fanfic piece to add to the literary universe that is Taeny :D ( ... )

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Re: Awesome Taeny One-shot, My Friend ! humyourheart May 20 2013, 14:08:48 UTC
Writing in present tense is such a pain OTL

Anyway, I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for reading :)

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anonymous May 16 2013, 02:01:42 UTC
This fic gives me so many feelings. Its probably because in my mind,it has two themes running alongside each other, yet are inextricably intertwined. One is a light and fluffy theme of Tiffany being so absorbed in Taeyeon and finally getting Taeyeon to love her back. The other is Taeyeon's journey of self-discovery and acceptance, aided along by someone who understands and loves her. Both themes merged into one makes this a remarkable story. The fluff and the sweetness wins my heart,though. Tiffany being so aware of Taeyeon even in the midst of a crowd when they don't even know each other, is an image that has made the character of Tiffany such a loveable one to me. -tipco09

Thank you for everything. This fic added so much to the 1527th page TaeNy celebration. It made the fic collection that much more special.

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humyourheart May 20 2013, 14:12:13 UTC
You always make me notice something new about what I write. Ironic, but I kinda love it. ;A;

Thank -you- for inviting me to contribute to that :)

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anonymous May 16 2013, 02:12:28 UTC
Oh and I forget to say that I love the present tense. I want more of it. Don't stop. - tipco09

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humyourheart May 20 2013, 14:12:29 UTC
Present tense is omg OTL xD

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