Baby, Think it Over - Chapter Nine (part two)

[hurricanecosmo]

Title: BABY, THINK IT OVER   (Chapter Nine, part two))
Disclaimer:  I do not own Viewfinder or any of it's awesome characters - Yamane-sensei does
Warnings: Language, sex talk
Characters: Akihito x Asami, OC
Rating:  18

There was no one to help him here.  Of course it wasn’t like he was going to die or anything.  It wasn’t as if Karube was going to go

Comments

[syhrain]

Noooo ㅠ.ㅠ ! Aki's first belong to asami. Asami hurry and save aki.
Thanks for the wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see what happen next （⌒▽⌒）

[hurricanecosmo]

Thank you so much. Love that you are following. Next chapter will be up sometime tomorrow.

[talisen999]

Thank you for this update! I agree with Syhrain "Hurry up Asami!"
P.S. Your link in the first part posted on YA doesn't work. I had to click on your livejournal name to come here.

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! Sorry about the link not working. A little clueless most of the time! LOL! Next chapter will be up tomorrow

[bellieswtpea]

No! Asami down stairs, the creepy isn't sincere enough to take akihito to his bed. Jerk! Hurry, hurry! Akihito does want you Asami, just as much as you want him. I hope you tie the karube dude and have him watch take Akihito (with akiKs consent) so can finally understand he never had a chance to be in Akihito heart much less in his cute ass. Cliffies are are so painful. Thanks for the update. Can't wait for more.

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! You are too funny! Next chapter is up tomorrow

[nbsiren]

Love you for posting all of chapter 9 :) I can only chant stall him Aki, stall him Aki...Asami's coming...

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! Thank you! Love that you are following! Next chapter is up tomorrow

[ameris57]

My. Poor Aki and poor Ayane too (even if it's just a doll). But Asami will for sure be there in time.

And yes it would be great to see him take Aki before karubes eyes, and after that punish him in some ways that dissuade him to do something like this again. See forward to the next chapter. Big kisses and hugs.

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! So glad you are following! Next chapter is up tomorrow