Baby, Think it Over - Chapter Nine (part two)

[hurricanecosmo]

Title: BABY, THINK IT OVER   (Chapter Nine, part two))
Disclaimer:  I do not own Viewfinder or any of it's awesome characters - Yamane-sensei does
Warnings: Language, sex talk
Characters: Akihito x Asami, OC
Rating:  18

There was no one to help him here.  Of course it wasn’t like he was going to die or anything.  It wasn’t as if Karube was going to go

Comments

[crimson_elf90]

:O! First things first, THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!! :D Came home from work and was sooo happy ^^! Was amazing as always! You'll have to lend me that brain of yours so i can write some of the thousand of fics i contemplate but never actually get around to writting ;D

But poor Aki-poo! He's an idiot lol, a loverbal idiot but an idiot none the less :P But then... if Aki wasnt putting himself into these kinds of situations by trying to stand on his own and protect people he loves than Asami would never have to come to his rescue and we'd never see Asami in 'the-alpha-male-get-off-my-aki-kitty-mode' or get a rescue sex scene!! :D (This is me hoping that Aki gets rescued in the first word of the next chapter so Asami can be his first ^^!)

Cant wait for the next installment :D Hope Asami breaks down the door with a flying kick and sails into Karube, kicking him off the bed and leaving Asami rather neatly placed between Akihito's legs ^^

[hurricanecosmo]

You are so welcome! Thank YOU for reading and thank you too for your kind words! LOL! Yeah, love that alpha male! Always have! The next chapter is up tomorrow :)

[rethzneworld]

asami why you so slow T^T i hope you'll come with a bang! (literally i hope)

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! You are funny. Next chapter is up tomorrow

[soniahikari]

this story is so good i read it all today!!!! XD beautiful work!!! asami please save aki!, and karube will be punished right? I'm waiting for your next chapter !!!

[hurricanecosmo]

I am so glad you like it! Thank you! Next chapter is up tomorrow

[bru160]

o.o

That mother fu**er IS SOOO GOING TO DIE!!! SLOWLY!

Run, Asami! Fly, Asami! Travel through time, Asami! JUST GET INTO THAT ROOM ON TIME!!!!!!!

Karube, you creep! Are you so dumb as to think that Aki wants you? You have gone mental, you dipshit!

Tense chapter! I just want a happy sexy one now, I think we all deserve it after all this tension!

Post soooon!!!!!

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! You are too funny! Next chapter is up tomorrow... :)

[sekhmetrising]

Ahh! My heart is beating fast! Great chapters! Can't wait for the next one!

[hurricanecosmo]

Thank you! Next one up tomorrow