Baby, Think it Over - Chapter Nine (part two)

[hurricanecosmo]

Title: BABY, THINK IT OVER   (Chapter Nine, part two))
Disclaimer:  I do not own Viewfinder or any of it's awesome characters - Yamane-sensei does
Warnings: Language, sex talk
Characters: Akihito x Asami, OC
Rating:  18

There was no one to help him here.  Of course it wasn’t like he was going to die or anything.  It wasn’t as if Karube was going to go

Comments

[schatten_00]

Asami! hurry!

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! Next chapter is up tomorrow

[radcat38]

Oh, no, poor Aki!!!! Asami hurry and come rescue Akihito and Ayane!! And teach Karube a very important lesson: Do Not Touch What Is Loved and Cherised!!
Again love how you write this. Loved the addition of Ryan's last name, the emergence of the Asami-sama, the rushed un-examined heroics of Akihito, the beginning of the VF world and their relationship. Am so happy I got to read both parts of this chapter. Cool. Cannot wait for black-hat hero Asami to ride in and save the day!!! Aki...keep stallin'
Ayane..rescue is coming...
cool...

[hurricanecosmo]

Oh Cat! Thank you. So glad you are seeing all of that! I did mean it to be there. Thank you. Hope you are safe and made it to your destinations all on time. Next chapter will be up tomorrow.

[angelicazefiro]

Wooosh!!! I'm breathless! Darn it asami, get there now!

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! Next chapter is up tomorrow

[phonoi]

AHHHHHHHH! Asami go save Akihito NOW!!!! Oh, I wish bad, bad, things on Karube right now...

I love how you added Kirishima into this fic so well. The second I saw that Ryan's last name was Kirishima, I squealed.

Thanks again for another wonderful chapter, OMG it is so intense right now!

[hurricanecosmo]

LOL! It was fun to add him. Fun to do that kind of "fourth wall" stuff. Thank you for your kind words. Next chapter is up tomorrow.

[ickyickypoopoo]

Asami, you better save my akihito before that pervert Karube gets his wish.

A spiked tongue piercing ball? Yikes? Can't imagine how it feels to have that in your tongue. I have a tongue pierce myself but with the normal barbell but to have a spike one? Hhmm

[hurricanecosmo]

I wanted to have something a little more shocking and I did see the spiky ones on line. I figured with Karubes money though he could have pretty much anything he wanted custom made. Crazy Karube is into pain and into handing it out as well. Next chapter will be up tomorrow.