Oddly enough, English is my first language, though you probably wouldn't be able to guess from my stupidity. *head-->really blunt object* In my defence, I've only spent 3 out of the past 18 months in an English-speaking country. :0)
He stooped over them and delicately ran his fingers over the petals. He had promised himself he wasn’t going to cry on this errand but his face was wet and he pulled his trembling hand away from the flower, afraid he’d damage it. I like that. Such sorrow.
It was strange. It was strange that it should be so comfortable. Being with Monaghan was like slipping into a well-worn pair of shoes. But this leaves me with hope.
But I agree with the above. Part One was the best part ;D
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What I love most about this story is Part One :0) *bits knuckle to hold back squees of joy*
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That should read: *BITES knuckle* oie.
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but secretly does a happy dance cuz there's gonna be MORE!!!
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I like that. Such sorrow.
It was strange. It was strange that it should be so comfortable. Being with Monaghan was like slipping into a well-worn pair of shoes.
But this leaves me with hope.
But I agree with the above. Part One was the best part ;D
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Heartbreaking and captivation and I want to know more.
singing a song that Billy had heard in his cradle
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