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[hyacinth_sky747]

Wishing Stars
Part One
d/b
AU
Warnings: Space
Disclaimer: This is fiction.

Comments

[daydreambeleevr]

It was her first dance and his sister wore a pink gown. It was a warm day and Billy sat in the kitchen with his jeans rolled up and his feet bare. The sunlight fell in soft bars through the windows and he could see her through the doorway of her bedroom standing in front of the mirror.

this is the passage that brought actual tears to my eyes. it's a great example of what i love the most about your writing. you have a subtle hand at including little pieces, things many writers ignore, that flesh your stories out and give them greater depth. this is such a strong beginning, i'm thrilled to see it's going to be an on going series. i haven't seen this particular scenario, and i'm really looking forward to learning more about what a tactician is and what their job function is. this is going to be sooo good!

kerry =)

[hyacinth_sky747]

omg, thank you. I hope it's going to be good.

*crosses fingers*

[apple_pi]

*holds breath waiting for more*

[hyacinth_sky747]

Don't turn blue!

*writes fast!*

[indiehobbitlass]

I eagerly await further chapters! I'm intrigued by the not-quite-earthly setting too.

Absolutely fabulous dahling, as always xxx

[hyacinth_sky747]

Thank you, lovey.

xoxox

[mydorkside]

Warnings: Space
*giggles and giggles some more*

I am titillated and awaiting eagerly...

[hyacinth_sky747]

omg! i thought i was being so clever when i wrote that! space! i'm such a hoot!

[fitofpique]

Hee! You are always being clever, Coco, even when you don't know it.

This is fantastic! I'm off to read part two, you darling.

<3<3<3<3