Everyone needs a little nurturing sometimes, although the naked nurturing and the be-coated nurturing involve very different techniques. Speaking of the shirt,shirt,nude,coat dichotomy, you seem to need things in an almost narritive sense: -#2 (Chapter 1) the people talk about Erin's needs, -#3 (Chapter 2) society deems Erin needs to be sent to the crazyhouse, -#4 (Chapter 3) Erin heals the sick of mind and those who are seen as sick only because of society's innate sickness, yet the audience knows Erin needs some of her own medicine. -#5 (Chapter 4) Escaping from the binds of society, Erin needs to be completely, Walden-Pond-esque free, -#6 (Chapter 5) Returning from her revelatory exile, Erin girds herself against society's cold shoulder as she ventures back into the world with the help -#7 (Chapter 6)of a kindly girl named Judy... and finds her home! -#8 (Epilogue)... (after figuring out how it would affect her mortage, income, & tax situation.)
Could knock that damn DaVinci Code off the bestseller list, you know?
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-#2 (Chapter 1) the people talk about Erin's needs,
-#3 (Chapter 2) society deems Erin needs to be sent to the crazyhouse,
-#4 (Chapter 3) Erin heals the sick of mind and those who are seen as sick only because of society's innate sickness, yet the audience knows Erin needs some of her own medicine.
-#5 (Chapter 4) Escaping from the binds of society, Erin needs to be completely, Walden-Pond-esque free,
-#6 (Chapter 5) Returning from her revelatory exile, Erin girds herself against society's cold shoulder as she ventures back into the world with the help
-#7 (Chapter 6)of a kindly girl named Judy... and finds her home!
-#8 (Epilogue)... (after figuring out how it would affect her mortage, income, & tax situation.)
Could knock that damn DaVinci Code off the bestseller list, you know?
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