Comments | hyungdeul: just my luck; [onew/jonghyun]

hyungdeul

just my luck; [onew/jonghyun]

Oct 02, 2009 17:29

just my luck
onew/jonghyun; pg-13
4,485 words
Jinki finds his luck in the most unexpected of places. I have no excuse. :| This is just weird and cracky, idk. LUCKY THONGS, AHOY.

( Jinki doesn't know what the appropriate reaction is when their stylist comes back with an impossibly small, tight-looking pair of black thongs. )

group: shinee, pairing: onew/jonghyun

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hyungdeul October 3 2009, 00:18:25 UTC

THIS COMMENT MADE ME SMILE SO STUPIDLY TO MYSELF, SRSLY. SPARKLY RAINBOW TEXT SOBS FOREVER ♥

This was such a random thing, idk where the stuff here came from. I just wanted Jongyu to get together in a cracky way and it all ended with thong-wearing Jinki. IT JUST LOOKED RIGHT IN MY HEAD 8D

Chansung/Key is such a cute pair, I wonder why people don't write more for it. Seems to me like Key'd boss him around forever be sweet and accommodating to him.

The song was random; it was playing on itunes while I was writing that very scene. So I used it and it the results were more lol than I expected. Just imagining Jinki and Jonghyun belting out the high notes to that is rofl-worthy so I slipped it in. :D

A confession about the TaeMinKey - that was one of the first scenes I wrote! The story just had to go there in whatever way possible 8DD

I adore long (and sparkly) comments, so thank you so much! ♥

jonghyun October 2 2009, 11:50:50 UTC

WHUT WAIT I HAVE NO WORDS *A*
like dubulove almost voiced out everything i think about this
ZOMG THE LUCKY THONGS AND I JUST REALLY DIED AT THIS: Jonghyun's eyes bug out of his head. "Thong?" He turns to Jinki with undisguised desperation. "Please tell me you're in a thong."
AND LOL MINHO WEARING THE LAST THONG = PRECTION XDDDD
LULZ I LOVE THIS REALLY XD
♥

hyungdeul October 3 2009, 00:23:34 UTC

And I love this comment, too! ♥

Jonghyun is a hormonal teenage boy, of course he'd want to see Jinki in a thong 8D It's kind of sad that Minho stole the last one... well, for Jonghyun. Jinki is a happy bunny to be rid of it forever. :))

Thanks a lot! I'm glad it worked for you! ♥

yumeyana October 2 2009, 12:58:47 UTC

LMAO. oh jinki. the things that make you lucky. xD

hyungdeul October 3 2009, 00:26:12 UTC

Let's hope he keeps the lucky streak now that his 'charms' are gone. But with Jjong there I'm sure he'll manage. :))

Thank you!

scylladakylla October 3 2009, 07:16:01 UTC

Cries, just cries. Onew with a black thong. A LUCKY black thong, oh God. ♥ BECAUSE HIS ASS IS TOO BIG. Poor, poor boy, why is his life so hard. ;-;

B'awww, Onew being jealous of Jongkey. :( Poor boy always does get excluded even though he tries so hard to be part of the "cool crowd", doesn't he?

Jinki hurriedly says, "Thank you for the prize, please continue supporting SHINee!"
Oh God, I giggled so hard, because I can totally see Onew doing this, bowing and thanking screaming fangirls for their support even as he's running away from them.

"You're such a bitch, Jjong," Kibum says, but his voice is warm. "Especially during the part where you made googly eyes at Jinki." He proceeds to demonstrate said googly eyes, batting his eyelashes at Jinki and singing "I have nothing if I don't have you" in perfect falsetto. At some point in Kibum's 'impersonation,' Minho is persuaded to join in, and he spins Kibum around twice before dipping him.
"Oh, Jinki!" Kibum swoons in Minho's arms.Cutest mental image ever. I can TOTALLY see them doing ( ... )

hyungdeul October 3 2009, 22:34:40 UTC

D'aaw blame my brain for the thong, not Onew's huge ass 8D

I watched some Yunhanam again in preparation for this fic, and yeah, Onew always looked the 'outsider' in a lot of moments. Idk if they were deliberately playing up the Jongkey or it was truly intentional dkljdl poor baby ;__;

Key is the real bitch in this house. His natural tendency for melodrama just worms its way into everything I write. :))

Jonghyun's unluckiness culminates into that final scene :( Poor, horny boy.

I'm so glad you liked it! ♥

kyaa_kawaii October 29 2009, 17:50:30 UTC

Onew in a thong is so amusing to imagine :33

Jonghyun's eyes bug out of his head. "Thong?" He turns to Jinki with undisguised desperation. Here I was like lol@Onew because I thought Jjong wouldn't, idk, like it so much (I realize now that he would.) "Please tell me you're in a thong." And I went "... Well. Apparently he didn't mind it." And by that, I wanted Onew to wear the thongs again because *coughcouch!thong!sex would becoughepiccough*

Now I really wish I wasn't having a writer's block or summat atm. Because I want to write. You do that to me ://

I don't just love you KyuHae fics: I love all of your fics ♥

And I have read all of your fics, I just haven't commented on them all. I might do, at some point :D About the fics you've written that I like the best? I have them on my iPod. Just thought you'd like to know~