white walls; [onew/jonghyun]

[hyungdeul]

white walls
onew/jonghyun; pg-13
2,839 words
Summary: Jonghyun loses his voice, and other faculties. (WARNING: there is death and general fuckery ahead). For pinkweather. I'm sorry, this just turned out... weird. :\

Comments

[kyaa_kawaii]

I'm stealing this spot because I have the right to have some fun eventhough I'm ill :)

[hyungdeul]

Li! I don't think this qualifies as fun... /fidgets :(

[kyaa_kawaii]

You're right. This doesn't qualifies as fun :/
Kiddin'. sorry it took so long for me to get to read this ;o; I was busy fighting down my fever and mom's worry Though it wasn't happy really... But I loved it anyway because it was ... It was just the way I like angst fics/dark-themed fics, actually :) Though I can't see why Jinki had to die. I'd say kill Jjong. I did not just say that!
Lol, I just scrolled down to read some of the comments and, am I the only one who actually a)yes, thought it was a bit creepy but b)still was like going all sparkling eyes over it and not really minding that Jjong went crazy? I guess I am weird. And I guess you don't get how much I like this because I suck at telling you it. I love it, okay? ♥ And I would make that heart bigger if it weren't for that I'm feeling nauseous and I think I have to lie down and/or bend over and breath calmly. (No, it's got nothing to do with you, so don't worry :3)

(Btw. Did you put (WARNING: there is death and general fuckery ahead) after the 11th?)

[hyungdeul]

it's okay! i hope you're feeling much better now. :)

i... should really stop writing dark-themed fics. i think i'm better at the fluff and romance anyway lol. still glad that you read and liked it even if it had a horrid ending ;-;

(yeah, i had to put it in to at least warn people of the less than pleasant surprise waiting for them should they decide to click on the link D:)

[arymee]

so... can jh sing again? no?
Lol you confuse me
but i like the way you described jong's feeling and how jinki made jong feel alive again.
lol@ jonghyunie's mother <3

[arymee]

okay, i think i missed sth here (:
so.. uhm.. jong kill jinki, wth.
this's so creepy. and oh my jinki *sobs*
but. i kinda love it.
your writting is just amazing

[hyungdeul]

i'm guessing you re-read it? sorry if it confused you at first. D:

thank you! my writing isn't at all amazing, but i try. :)

[hyungdeul]

...yes, i did? i'm sorry! :( rl!jinki is doing fine and canoodling with his members, though, so don't be too sad!

thanks, i'm glad the steadily going insane part worked for you. ♥

[hoyah]

8D wow that was kinda trippy

but amazing! i love your style even though i don't think i really have words for it

[hyungdeul]

it's you! hellooo! hah, yeah, that was kinda trippy to write. i'm glad it worked for you. ♥

[hoyah]

yes it's me! xD

wait... what about me? *flop*

[xxqod]

I like it how you mix real life events in your fic ^^ (refering to swine flu)
Jonghyun's mom sounds like a fun mom to have xD

I feel sorry for Jjong, because he can't sing... His voice is too beautiful to be gone..

I love Jinki for being there for Jonghyun
really liked it <3 ~~~

[hyungdeul]

i tried to incorporate rl events, but it's not the focal point of the story. i'm glad you pointed it out, tho! thank you for reading! ♥